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I Will Be There
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I Will Be There |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Hi everyone, This one still needs a little rewriting, but this is pretty much the whole picture of it. " I Will Be There " © 2001 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved V1: Baby you're never alone each tear you cry I'll cry with you. When the pain keeps pouring down I wanna feel what you feel too. Honey make me understand need to know what you're going through... L: 'Cause I can not stand seeing your sad face, and all your heartaches I will erase... C: Any day or night and through wrong and right I will be there. 'Til death do us part with all of my heart I will be there. V2: Baby no I won't think twice about walking through hell for you. But your eyes doesn't say much If only I knew what you knew. If only you'd talk to me I'd turn all of you gray skies blue... L2: 'Cause i don't ever wanna see you sad I'll love away all the feelings you had... C: Any day or night and through wrong and right I will be there. 'Til death do us part with all of my heart I will be there. V1: Baby you're never alone each tear you cry I'll cry with you... C: Any day or night and through wrong and right I will be there. 'Til death do us part with all of my heart I will be there. ( Until fade ) [This message has been edited by Hallucination (12-19-2001 11:05 PM).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sounds pretty good already Brian...  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Another nice write Brian! I love your style of writing, you are very talented, and I can see the actions throughout the write. Good job! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
would be nice for a love song! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* beautifully written. I hope you sing this one to your lady love. She will swoon. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! God Bless Heather aka Cherokeegirl Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Brian, Oh! I REALLY like this.. I could almost hear the melody in my head. Beautiful lyrics..  Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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