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For The Children And Us (Duet with Noah)
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For The Children And Us (Duet with Noah) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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A beacon of light shines through the night Cherubs flutter down into the heart of the moonlight From the heart of a star in a radiant shrine Resplendent grace beaming into an innocent child’’s eyes -The brightness of the eyes, the child so pure Their brilliance for life will forever endure. Through times of joy and happiness and love. Our little angels given us, with love from above. In the arms of unconditional love walks a shepherd Comforting the needy of heart, purifying each fellow man’’s pasture The golden rule is planted, the spirit of giving sprouting Rising to the symphony of angels, graciously giving -The shepherd walks alone in the dark of a still night. Guided by the single beam of the most bright of light. Taking the love that the world has to freely give. Letting pure joy ever deep, reside in a heart and live. Mirror the gift of love to your families Worship the spirit of hope lovingly Reach for the stars with arms wide open May this platinum halo of comfort encircle us all within -Families born as one to the other Mother, Father, Daughter and Brother Lifting their arms to absorb His love. Encircled by friends, a Savior above. Cherish a little prayer Let us share and love one another Cherish a little faith May we comfort all and pray -And in the darkness of each night our hearts will be guided by light Keeping our faith of one without sin. I bow my head, tears fall...I say..Amen... Thank You Noah for 1,3,5, and 7 above... You did well young man... |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Noah, this is wonderful! You are reaching out to gentle men who share a gift of poetry, and are accomplished writers. Both of you are to be commended in making Passions the Family that it is. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Just stunning you two..... I'm at a loss for words.  Just beautiful.Hugs to you both, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry and Noah...this is amazing! A truly beautiful duet you two! Thoroughly enjoyed! ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful duet and I enjoyed it very much! Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you both did well! This is what it's all about right?  Kathleen (Kay) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Noah and Magnus...remarkable, and a pleasure to read!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lady in White...I appreciate your words... and Noah made it a beautiful poem...He is a gifted young man.. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice combination, and a very lovely, spirtual poem. Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
RP25...most welcome...and Noah did a superb write...easy to follow up... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy...this has been very enjoyable...Happy to work with Noah on the poem...happy to share. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Charisma...thank you...And I feel that Noah should also have the honor of saying thank you to the poets and poetesses of Passions... Jump in there Noah... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kay...yes..this is what is all about... Thanx.. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I love to see poets collaborating and you certainly did an excellent job on this. I think working with someone tends to give you a "gentle" push at doing your best, and that is truly evident here. Congratulations you two! ~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Barry and Noah the beauty of this poem brought tears of joy to my eyes. It is absolutely wonderful. I love it. You guys did an incredible job. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Barry and Noah, Well team...take a bow. Well done! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed writing this wonderful poem with you, dear Barry, and how we had a great time writing this, just as he is so talented and brings sunshine to us all. Thank you all for your beautiful comments, we all love you so so much!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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