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Lingering......
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Lingering...... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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His kiss lingered, long past good bye She couldn’t forget, didn’t want to try His touch yet burned, smoldering this ache He was the one her heart, would never forsake His eyes tore through her soul, possessing His voice in her mind, gently caressing With whispers replayed on summer’s breeze Recalling shared passionate, breathy pleas And she remembers him still Knows through all time, she always will Unable to release this memory’s hold Her love of this man silently extolled On the wind, sent heartfelt prayer his way The words she never had voice to say “I loved you then, I love you now with all that heaven will allow” ~SEA~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Susan, you are soooooo romantic, your beautiful heart sings in your words! (smiles) May memories of love forever fill her heart and may eternal love forever glisten in her! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-18-2001 12:59 PM).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Noah, you are such a sweetie! Thank you.... |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I especially enjoyed the last stanza of this truly heartfelt write. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Bittersweet...if only heaven would allow the memories to be new, again. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
His kiss lingered, long past good bye She couldn’t forget, didn’t want to try His touch yet burned, smoldering this ache He was the one her heart, would never forsake =================================== And she remembers him still Knows through all time, she always will Unable to release this memory’s hold Her love of this man silently extolled ==================================== “I loved you then, I love you now with all that heaven will allow” ===================================== Good grief ... some of these lines are tattooed on my soul ... not inked but burned in ... sloooow burn. You do know you just penned a moth anthem, right?  You do know you just penned one awesome poem dont you? Then you will also know...(IWIHWT) Very very very cool poem Sea-girlie. You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
silly mothy me....forgot to put in me library *click*  You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Shadowed_Innersense Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 49somewhere at the edge |
Sensational!! A voice well found! Did not like this one ...LOVED it!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OK...my comp is having a senior moment lets try this one more mothy time  *click* ROFLMAO |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
I'll ditto JM's "real" comment...my comp doesn't have "moments"... with the exception of keeping this moment... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Fantabulous, gal  Gracious, but you sure can write! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sea, just popped in to say hello and saw your lovely poem. You always touch my heart with your romantic writes.Have a wonderful holiday dear friend. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan, So pretty your writing is Once again, I enjoyed.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Soft and lovely, SEA! Very nice! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
The words she never had voice to say “I loved you then, I love you now with all that heaven will allow” ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ OH SEA!!!! This is....this is...is... one heck of a write girlie! And you KNOW I love it!! WOW!! Oh My...*Sigh* ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Opeth~ thank you!! Duncan~ yes, if only.... Janet~ a moth anthem....yes, I suppose it is LOL thank you so much for your generous praise Shadowed_Innersense~ wow, very cool thank you and welcome!!Deca~ (((hugs))) thank you Interloper~ you are so kind to me, thank you  Dee~ hay girl!! Good to see you around!! Thank you, I hope you have a beautiful holiday season too!! Tara~ thank you sweet friend Denise~ you are wonderful, thank you!! Nancy~ thank you for making me smile, you reply so nice to me ~SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know the power of those lingering kisses...some touch us so much more then others...James |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James, I have a feeling yours would be one to linger.... thank you |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
As always, a very lovely write, sweet friend. (((hugs)))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah yes, how did this slip of a poem find it's way without my seeing it? Well done girl...very well done! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe darling girl I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous. The lines in this are soooooooo amazing, this is really and truly outstandingly good. Normally your writing is wonderful this is even better than normal. This is an Even Now poem, and we all have at least one of those inside I think. Wonderful outstanding writing darling girl The flow and the rhythm is without doubt utterly excellent. Really well written and a really great piece from you.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
OMG Sea, ditto Janet Marie...this one even spoke my heart! I am sure a lot of people will ache with this one, excellent writing my sweet friend! ~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~ |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
It's all been said, just thought I'd agree, This poem is beautiful... Lingering...by SEA!!! |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
SEA, I love this beautiful poem, filled with longing. Its flows so smoothly. Very nice work. Cheryl |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
This is a very pretty piece! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
SEA, Well expressed. Glad to have someone put to words our experience. Words so true. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I love each word so true to love. Thanks for sharing. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue...I love this write and I simply cherish the last two lines...so powerful a statement. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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