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Taking Time
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Taking Time |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
I found a small hurried excuse laughing at the sky in sequence happy to be misserable longing to more than the sum, slamming against the doors of future intolerance which floats around all of us hoping to catch a glimpse of promise. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This had a very closed in feeling, like being trapped in a closet... thank you for this Michael...it's good to have you home again! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
My heart felt loss of hope in your words...I can only hope that taking time to see the beauty and love around you will bring hope back to your heart. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Michael, this is so so sad, I feel hopelessness from your heart! (sigh) I pray you can not let those doors of intolerance lock you out and you can open them and see the light of hope and promise before your loving heart always! (sigh) Believe in yourself, and you will find all the promise of joy in life! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, our hearts are always with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Ummmmm. WOW...... Not very creative in my comments now am I.......lol This one of those that left me wondering...... As ALways Jenn E |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
I'll agree with Jenn E on this one . . . wondering of future summations, missing the sky . . . |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
So good to read one of yours again. We have missed you. Love, Me It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen. |
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