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Love is dead
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Love is dead |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
Love is Dead Love is dead,can you not see The heart has bled,she was all to me We pass by unseen,no one cares So casual it seems , the vacant stares As we arrive , another sorrow goes Can I survive it, take the coming blows I want to scream, "love is dead" But "Thank you for coming " Was all I said. Arthur |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* now why does this bring such hot tears to my eyes. Will I ever understand the emotions of others or will I just share their pain? My heart hurts for you, arthur. You deserve love in your life and I pray you receive the gift of it. **big hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Auther, I am so sorry to see this pain  Love is never completely dead... at least not your capability of loving. *hugs* to you.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Arthur, this is sooooooo very sad, my heart cries out to you! (sigh) I pray with all my heart that you will again love soon and find true happiness to forever whisper in your heart! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so very much, dearest friend, my heart is always with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Arthur, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, Arthur, this is so sad. (hug) Kathleen (Kay) |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Ouch! But an interesting piece. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love maybe sleeping but the love inside our hearts can never die, that's what keeps us going. Great expression. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I want to scream, "love is dead" But "Thank you for coming " Was all I said. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Michael, this is so very true! How often do we bite our tongues and not say what we are really thinking. Love the rhyme technique in this one also. Great writing here! ~Hugs, across the pond love, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Yes I have thought the same but love will revive itself always. I breathe the dust, the dust is me. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Truly feel this in my heart, Arthur. How much love can hurt. Sandra |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Arthur, I'm sorry for your pain. Love may have died for you, but a beautiful woman is going to bring it alive again for you. ((big hugs)) |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i know just how you feel...helen |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know this feelings...we become so attached to a certain one...so emotionally involved that we want it to work with all of our heart...and when it doesn't we do feel like love is dead...James |
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