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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2001-12-17 04:07 PM

Come,
Touch me with your eyes
Leave no questions
Wear no disguise

Bare your heart vulnerable
As I lay mine before you, naked at your feet
Love me, just love me
Slow, tender, complete

With touch from fingertips soft
Trail a path to my soul upon sultry skin
Venture to mountains high, valley below
Over and over, please, once again

Tell me your secrets
In passionate kiss
Give me something to cherish
~Something to miss

Come,
In one touch, just one time
Let me give you my all
In physical rhyme

~SEA~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-12-17 04:11 PM

Here, let me hold the door open for the men of Passions....

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-12-17 04:12 PM

WOW!!!If he does not answer such a yearning call as this he is out of his mind. Very well done. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-12-17 04:12 PM

(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, may his tender touch forever light your heart with joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-12-17 04:16 PM

OH Susan!! Oh my!
Watch the fellas line up to sign this one! Wonderfully sensual!
~Hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

5 posted 2001-12-17 04:50 PM

Susan,

You'll beating the men of Passion's off with a stick

Nice write

I liked.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-12-17 05:38 PM

perfect gift given
asking nothing in return
receiving my all

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2001-12-17 05:44 PM

wow Sue...this is a very warm write...
someone has missed the boat if they don't show up.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

8 posted 2001-12-17 06:30 PM

Karilea, thanks for holding the door open.

This is wonderfully loving and sensual, Susan. Certainly, one of your best.

(((hugs))) sweet friend

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

9 posted 2001-12-19 01:57 PM

So that is where interloper received inspiration, and I fully understand why...this was sizzling in its own descrptive juices. Most enjoyable to read.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2001-12-19 02:04 PM

SEA~
I LOVE it ... but ... you knew I would~
It mirrors my heart so completely~
Thanks gal~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

11 posted 2001-12-19 02:07 PM

Sea,absolutely sensual and romantic.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

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