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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-12-17 03:50 PM


You once used to bring me flowers
You'd deliver them to my door
But sadly those days are over
For I don't see your face here anymore

Why did you have to leave me
Was it something that I said?
Or was there somebody else
Who was now sharing your bed?

You didn't dare stay long enough
To see the hurt in my eyes
Did you think I was that stupid?
Didn't you think I was very wise?

Well your love certainly fooled me
I was blinded by your disguise
As I watched you pack your belongings
Whilst I bid your love goodbye

I've become a stronger person
Since the day you tore me apart
And in time I'll find another love
To help me mend my broken heart

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-12-17 03:55 PM


Definitely Sue, you will definitely find someone who is worthy of your golden heart!
This person will come crawling back to you, and when he does be sure to tell him that you're on to better things!
Best Wishes

RP

Startime
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2 posted 2001-12-17 04:15 PM


YES!!!And he will be worthy of the preciuos love that you will give him and will return that love with a gift of his own. **hugs** I am so sorry you were deceived in the game some make of love.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-12-17 04:20 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sue, my heart goes out to you, this is so very sad and I pray with all my heart you find true love worthy of your love soon. (big hugggsssss) Always believe in your heart, and you will find your dreams come true and the perfect love mending your sweet heart! (kisson cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is so sad but beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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