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Son Netier
Member

since 2001-12-11

Posts 116
The Garden State

0 posted 2001-12-17 09:42 AM

To say I’ll do or go where you will go,
Is just my love’s desire to be near you,
For by your side I am happy you know,
And will attempt to do what you will do.

It was a warm day in mid December,
When you arrived smiling with your ice skates,
Telling me it’d be a day to remember;
So I’m skating sliding to my ice fate.

She is beauty in her graceful motion,
Circles and spins around me standing there,
Seem down is the easiest direction,
But she helps me back up with patient care.

She glides so easy in her pinks and red,
Next time can I wrestle lions instead?

Bill

MrLeslie
Junior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 23
Island of JERSEY, British Channel Isles UK

1 posted 2001-12-17 09:57 AM

I guess you ended up on your butt Jim. lol

Excellent read!

Leslie de la Haye AKA Bald Eagle.

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

2 posted 2001-12-17 10:04 AM

What a wonderful write.Nice to have someone there.Peaches

Son Netier
Member

since 2001-12-11

Posts 116
The Garden State

3 posted 2001-12-17 10:12 AM

Leslie
More times than I cared to, what’s really hard is to see the small children laughing.

Peaches,
Yes, nice to have someone there that wasn’t laughing, or at least not when I could see her

Bill

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2001-12-17 10:56 AM

Even if you did land on your butt a lot it sounds like you had a wonderful time with the one your heart desires. I loved reading this poem. It shows the smile in your heart wrapped in ribbons of love. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-12-17 11:26 AM

Son,
It sounds like you enjoyed, I did.

Son Netier
Member

since 2001-12-11

Posts 116
The Garden State

6 posted 2001-12-17 11:30 AM

Startime,
More than a few, if the ice wasn’t so cold as well as hard, I might have just sat there and watched. It’s easy to have a smile when someone gives you one so readily.

Seymour,
I did enjoy all but the falls, got a skinned knee and a sore back(side), glad you enjoyed my writing of it. Next time I’ll just watch

Bill

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2001-12-17 10:45 PM

(sigh) Oh Son, this is sooooooo beautiful, what a beautiful experience it must had been! (smiles) May you forever roller-skate with your love on the heavens and beyond! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Son, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Hypnosis
Member

since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

8 posted 2001-12-17 10:48 PM

I'm happy you have discovered your true love, even though your butt was temporarily at the expense (giggles).

Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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