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The Wait
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The Wait |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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for there is something that I wait it holds my heart in hesitate I’ve been too long in patient sighs here I wait to claim my prize advancing me in snail’s run daily we each count moon and sun north and south it ties our tether at the mercy of another we wait together "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
May you both get what you have waited for. Peaches |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I hope you both don't have to wait too much longer. I could feel the sadness of your waiting. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
When one waits the very ticks of time seems endless..... I loved it Lady..... Wonderful.... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
I hope you get what you're waiting for....btw i love your pictuee you like ghostly and mysterious in it. -R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - excellent, as always. I love to read your writings... BC |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
I sure hope you recieve that what you are waiting for, and it is worth it, enough to have for the rest of your life. You have a sweet heart, you deverve it! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Helen, this is really wonderfully written. Enjoyed so much. ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Here's hoping the wait won't be too long... God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just an excellent piece about longing. I love your work. ~*~ May the spirit of this season live in your heart all year through ~*~ |
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