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Someday My Princess Will Come
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Someday My Princess Will Come |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Someday My Princess Will Come By: Noah Eaton 12/29/00 Somewhere out there in the wild blue yonder The love of my life whispers her words to the wind, longing for them to find me As I stare out the altar of the castle of my heart, lucubrating my words of love for this special person In whom is blindfolded to my eyes and forever visits me in my dreams The stained-glass windows are filled with the art and beauty of the visions I have of her Her lovely face shines on the faience that decorates the walls of my kitchen I think of her all the time, as I yearn for her, longing to make these dreams real From the tower of this castle, gussied up in my love for her, I continue to share my words of love, singing from paper, my companion My pen, the messanger of my heart, is pulled out of the scabbard of my heart, the receiver I hold it high into the air, and let loves words drip out from it’s tip like a cataract sung a rock-a-bye Sweet soft downpours of hearts voice come cascading down to the stream below The voices tap the water, ripples of passion slide out across the water, carrying loves voice in it’s eternal smile In the cathedral of this castle, I pray to Thee that my message reaches the one I love My voice that longs to speak to her, leading her down the floriferous meadows of my heart to the castle I want you, love, I need you more than anything in the world Let me hold your hand and take you to this magical world of love of mine Standing with chilly hands, my warm heart still beats with promise that I’ll find her someday As I softly sheath the pen of my heart into it’s scabbard, I crawl into my bed and fall asleep As I dream again of this girl that I fall in love with, but comfortly knowing That someday my princess will come… And I open my eyes to see... She has fallen into my arms at last... Smiling in majestic cheer... [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-16-2001).] |
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MrLeslie Junior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 23Island of JERSEY, British Channel Isles UK |
Wonderful my dear Noah...Another gem from your magical pen...Well done again! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Noah! Your words have so much expression and are always filled with hope and love. Hugs, Nancy.  "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Noah, you have so much vivid imagery in here, is it possible to drip any more LOVE from this pen than this? Your heart beats so strongly for your dreamwoman, I can hear it all the way up here, through the ice fog. May all your favorite love dreams come true, and when they do, I sure hope that pen keeps on writing. PS: line 5 typo, lubricating? or are you making up a new word? or do you know one I don't? LOL [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 12-16-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Princess if you are reading this or if you are in tune with Noah's desire reveal yourself to him...it will happen...we just don't know when...hope it's soon...James |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a beautiful piece Noah. A heart like this deserves a truly magical princess to take care of it. You have such a romantic heart, and one day, that heart will meet another romantic heart. Just like in this dream. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Noah, yes, someone is going to be very blessed when she finds you, or you find her! and you will! Believe it! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh yes, Noah, someday she will and be all that you hope and dream. Great poem. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Noah, what a beautiful poem, beautiful word very well does drip from your pen. I liked the imagery, very well done my friend! From your good friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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