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Christmas Around the Globe |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada 
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Christmas Around the Globe 'Twas on a clear December's eve, a chill was in the air, The townsfolk gathered at the church, to join in Christmas cheer; They raised their voice in hymns of old, to serenade the night … The warmth that flowed within the walls, was such a lovely sight. The men in proper dress attire, bow ties and Sunday suits, Gollashes left in disarray, upon the churches' stoop; The women, ankle length in gown, with pinafores and lace, While Christmas bonnets graced their heads, to frame each happy face. The children grinned and fidgeted, as always children will, The little boys in starched, white shirts … the little girls in frills; All sang into the joyous night, to praise the coming dawn, A harmony of voice and heart, grew forth in vibrant song. Outside the stained glass windows, lay a winter wonderland, Where not a single footprint marred the snow in reprimand; The blanket glowed in crystal flakes, in tribute to the night, To charm this tiny village scene, in peaceful, calm respite. Alas, the tranquil setting turned, within the tiny church, The congregation held their ground … while floors began to lurch! Repeatedly, the floorboards heaved - commotion quickly grew ... Gollashes soared about their heads, while books and bonnets flew! The elders held on to the pews, each mother to their child, The fathers grabbed their wives in tow, through chaos swift and wild! The church turned topsy-turvy, folks were flying upside down … Then suddenly, the earthquake stopped ..… and silence filled the town. The people dusted off their clothes, and heaved a heavy sigh, Another quake, just like the last … although they knew not why; They gathered at the windows, and they viewed the raging storm, The snow was gusting fiercely, while they watched the scene transform. As quickly as the squall had come, it hastily decreased, The snowflakes lingered lazily, until they slowly ceased; It drifted off, the people cheered, and found their place once more, They raised their voices higher than they ever had before. ~*~ Outside, a little child looked down, with wonder in her eyes … She shook the snow globe once again … to watch the snowflakes rise. /Kit McCallum |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is absolutely delightful, Kit! Wow! And what an ending! Quite the clincher!  Merry Christmas to you and yours, Kit! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 CLAPPING WILDLY!!! OH KIM, THIS IS SOOOOOOO GORGEOUS, I LOVE IT!!! (big huggssssssss) A congregation of love and cheer fills this beautiful poem behind the eyes of an innocent loving child! I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) Your loving words paint the spirit of the holidays both through a crowd and through a child's loving hearts! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! I've just added this to my private library, this is a sheer lovely timeless classic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kit, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
What a really magical story!!! I love this from Title to ending! Your imagination brought smiles and warmth and even wonder! Merry Mistletoe Dear Lady! Sincerely, Regina |
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MrLeslie Junior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 23Island of JERSEY, British Channel Isles UK |
Most wonderful Kit! Just awesome! A wonderful magical, mystical poem that is a must for childrens[And grownups] poetry book..Really enjoyed the read thank you! Reminded me of that Elvis number"All shook up":lol |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh what a magical poem!! I love this Kit. You need a snowglobe graphic here!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, This is simply a delight and a fabulous write Thank you for posting. *L* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kit! This is enchanting indeed! Ah, the magic of Christmas! This is a keeper...just love it! *Happy Holidays to you and yours* Hugs, Nancy "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I know that I'm always in for a welcome treat when reading your poems, Kit, but this one's ending!! I got extra icing on this one with its Twilight Zonish ending -- totally my style! Enjoyed thoroughly. -MVS "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Another quake, just like the last … although they knew not why; =============================== As quickly as the squall had come, it hastily decreased, The snowflakes lingered lazily, until they slowly ceased; ============================= Outside, a little child looked down, with wonder in her eyes … She shook the snow globe once again … to watch the snowflakes rise. ============================== OH CLEVER CLEVER YOU .... Very very cool Kit-girlie.... I am smiling at you and your poetic word play Love the conception of this and the way your mind works  This is delightful and needs to be illustrated as a holiday story card. I'll have my people call your people and we'll talk LOL |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Kit, this is precious! It made me laugh. Very nicely done. How on Earth did you come up with the idea for this one?  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kit, You rascal you! How delightful. What a clever mind you always have. And Merry Christmas to you too. Another keeper. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kit..you have surprised me with magic..and a smile...thank you for this special poem! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
 Oh yes, indeed, I love this delightful poem. BRAVO!!!**hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a lovely, magical piece. I think I may print this off and read it to my neice. You always come up with such wonderful stories, and that ending is just wonderful. With this story, and the snow on Friday night, I think I am starting to get into the spirit of the season. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Denise: Thank you so much for this lovely response Denise … you are very much appreciated! Mistletoe Angel: Thank you always for your enthusiastic responses Noah, you always bring a smile to my face! Rwood: Thank you so much for this delightful comment Regina, I'm very grateful! MrLeslie: LOL @ Elvis … thank you for this terrific response MrLeslie, very much appreciated! Poet deVine: Maybe I should do a smiley snow globe, lol. Thanks for enjoying Sharon, much appreciated! Seymour Tabin: I'm glad you enjoyed this Sy … thank "you" for this lovely response! Enchantress: And happy holidays to you as well Nancy, thanks so much for letting me know you enjoyed! MARK V SHELDON: LOL @ twilight zonish! Thank you for this wonderful comment Mark … you've given me a big smile, much appreciated! Janet Marie: LOL, I'm glad you enjoyed the word play JM … I was hoping it came across that way. Let's do lunch eh? Elizabeth: Aw, thank you Elizabeth, I'm glad I was able to give you a smile. I'm not sure where the idea came from … perhaps a little bit of "Whoville" in me somewhere, lol. Larry C: And a Merry Christmas to you Larry. Glad you enjoyed this piece, it was my pleasure, much appreciated! Martie: I'm glad I was able to make you smile Martie, and thank you for one in return, you are very much appreciated. Startime: Thanks so much for the bravo Startime … and big hugs back to you for this delightful response! Tracey: I'm happy I was able to help you get into the spirit Tracey, and I hope your niece enjoys it. Thanks so much for this lovely comment, I'm very grateful! Much appreciation and Happy Holidays to all, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 12-17-2001).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
For me, one of the best things about poetry is the wide-eyed awe at the way poets' minds work... This wonderful tale left me bug-eyed and laughing and greatly admiring the creator. *G* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Oh, that was just so good and so clever, and it will get lots of mileage I would like to think there is a little bit of "Whoville" in us all, and you showed that in this one, Bravo!~*~ May the spirit of this season live in your heart all year through ~*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Thanks for the Christmas present Kit Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Just like the folks in the globe...I never saw it coming! Great story, Kit! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kit darling girl I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous. Yes I know I always say that but then you always write to utter perfection. I wouldn’t have to say it was absolutely perfect if you didn’t always write so well would I? No exactly The whole of this was utterly fabulous and the ending was incredible I love it.    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kit- Oh...you are incredible! I absolutely LOVE the whole idea of this, and you've penned it PERFECTLY! The image this created touched me deeply and actually left me with a lump in my throat. Just wonderful...I can't say enough. Happy Holidays to you, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kit, I won't let this slip slide away so soon. It is just too good for this season to sneak away. I love Mysterias graphic and know that print. How did she do that? "bump" |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
One would think you were born an elf, you write so well of what it would be like to be inside the globe of life...thank you for this. It's a treasure! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful poem, Kit. I thoroughly enjoy reading everything you write. And, I really love this. You are such a wonderful poet. I definitely am going to keep this one. That is if you don't mind. If you do, just let me know. I'll give it back. |
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