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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Joined in our emotion, thought and dream to follow a path down the trail of forever lingering sensations, your lips of silken cream upon my morning sighs that nothing can sever oh, fate! so fickle at times, yet oh, so clever! enchanting two poems create one poetic scheme. A chronicle to transcend the mind unbound from earthen shackles obscuring the view in imaginings and heartbeats clearly found and in shutting my eyes, I can see only you the creation of a world made for just two ballads softly shared high above the ground spun and woven an intricate ballet all doubts and fears vanquished today |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet Dulcinea, may you forever dance the ballet of love and speak ballads through every happy heartbeat! (smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very captivating piece.Well done! |
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Shou-Lao Junior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 48 |
A well written intertwining piece. Thanks for the chance to read |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
You have captured the mystery and the wonder of the moment. It is a flowing and beautiful piece. I like the image of closing the eyes and simply feeling. Merci!! |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Noah Dulcinea means sweet mistress, so I suppose to write any other way would not be living up to my title. Thank you for your warm reply and sweet praises.  sodpossum I hope this sonnet opens your heart to the possibilities you have before you and if so inspired you will share it with the one you love. Thank you. Shou-Lao You are most welcome. May you entwine your soul with the one you hold dear and share the moment. Thank you for reading. amusemi Then close your eyes and let the magic sweep you into the loving arms of your someone special and feel it circle you in love. Merci tellement! |
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