Open Poetry #17 |
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My Love |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
*I figured that since I posted my poem "You Killed Me" I should in all fairness post a good poem about the same man. He is my hubby after all.* You are in my mind. I can see your face. I want your arms around me to hold me close, and feel your breath on my neck. Come to me in my dreams. Pull me closer to your body and never let go. O need your strength, your masculinity, to make me feel safe. Protect me from the cold, dark night and comfort my soul. Ease my fears of being alone and tell me that you love me. Let me know that you need me, too. To curl up next to me. To bring your nights pleasure. I am yours. Tell me your dreams and your pains. Let me share everything with you. Make me an essential part of your life. Where, if I were gone there would be a void in my place. Let me be your light of truth. Your springboard to greater things, the one you can run back to in your times of peril and doubt. I will hold you up and be your support. Your days I will fill with loving kindness and give you the respect you deserve. I pray your life is filled with the best of things, but even if it's not, I will be right there beside you. I give you all of me. My talents. My love. My sorrows. My fear. And all that I may accomplish. And all I ask is that you be near me and love me until I am gone. "I am nae poet, in a sense; But just a rhymer like by chance..." -Robert Burns [This message has been edited by Abigaile (edited 11-16-2001).] |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Beautiful words.What more could one ask for. Peaches |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautifully done. This is the way it should be, no? enjoyed. Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
how precious!!!! |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Abigaile... this is a beautiful declaration of love. Enjoyed the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful! The most beautiful magic in love is that it lasts until one wants it no more, otherwise it lasts eternally! (sigh) Sooooooo lovely, you are soooooo romantic, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Abigaile, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shinr upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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