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Abigaile
Member

since 2001-10-21

Posts 112
San Mateo, CA

0 posted 2001-11-16 01:19 PM

*Noah Eaton's poem "Do You Still Love Me?" brought back memories of a time that I had a friend who felt the same. This began a process of remembrance, and I found this old poem which I wrote during my painful time. Intrestingly enough, with time, patience and forgiveness, the man this poem is about is now my loving husband.*

Nightmares.
Flashbacks.
My heart bleeds.
Liar.
Thief.
You stole my innocence.
I tried to love you,
but you hurt me.
Evil.
Hatred.
Pain.
I hope you die.
You killed me,
left me hollow.
And when something
replaces the emptiness,
you return.
Haunting.
Killing.
Destroying what you can.
Stabbing me with memories.
Hitting me with doubt.
Bruising me so deep
I don't trust anymore.
Killing me
again
and
again.

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

[This message has been edited by Abigaile (edited 11-16-2001).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-11-16 01:42 PM

wow, powerful vent! Glad things are so much better now

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-11-16 03:28 PM

Very powerful write here Abigaile.
Glad everything worked out okay for the two of you!
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-11-16 08:35 PM

I know this anger. I'm glad you let it out before it internalizes into something that can actually kill you. It's not worth it.

HUGS.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-11-16 09:50 PM

Powerful write. No sword could ever match this might. Well expressed.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

5 posted 2001-11-16 09:55 PM

Abigaile,
You do know how to let it out! Whoa...so do we get to see the other side?

By the way, welcome to Passions. Nice to meet you!

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-16-2001).]

Abigaile
Member

since 2001-10-21

Posts 112
San Mateo, CA

6 posted 2001-11-16 10:24 PM

Thank you, everyone. *SMILE* If you wish to read "the other side" then you should read "My Love" in the open forums. Both this poem and that one are about the same man, my current husband. You could call this one "before" and the other one "after."

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

7 posted 2001-11-16 10:29 PM

Boy have I felt this same exact degree of anger before. I wound up with a different man because I couldnt work things out with the one who angered me. Well written Abby

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