Open Poetry #17 |
Blue Water of the Caribbean Climb My Mountain |
D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
I took the words given me in the love of writing and formulated this dream of thought. Oh blue water of the Caribbean Oh how I love to glance my emotions off you In the rhythmic intoxicating moves of my feelings In rising tides you take me To the special places That hypnotizes me much like a therapist would But the fingers you do it with Melt into me in soothing swells And the marine life swim around In its total blessings Of a dolphins speech As she saw something quivering In the delight, smile within Oh mountain of my life how elusive you are Oh how I must keep climbing For the crest is always one step further In my mind And as the stones fall they are not replaced But hands of gold weave their way up A spec at a time For in the reality of things worthwhile You have to struggle To put the right words to use In order to explore upwards In the ray of my sunshine Lie in the clouds of doubt For rainbows keep generating before me In the spirit of selfish hopes To fight opposite of the eclipse To open me up with the ideas That blossoms at all levels That we choose to reside in Oh World you are my playground For the lure for far away places Leads me on the ride of my life Riding Unicorns of beauty And in my space in time You are my favorite planet to explore My feeling with So let me picture this into the photography That lies within To write the words that will take the seas Into the mountain Creating the waterfalls of delight That will keep this poet peering From his oxygen mask of needs D.Lester Young (12/15/01) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Soooooooo breathtakingly beautiful, sweet friend! I have never seen the Carribbean Sea, but I dream of going there ever so much! (smiles) Your beautiful words send me to tip-toeing on the beach sands to flying over mountains! We all love you so much, sweet friend! (big hugggsssss) You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet eagle, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I have decided I love this world of yours that I see through your words. Stunningly magnificent. *sigh* I lost myself in its beauty. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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