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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2001-12-15 04:44 PM

Song Of The Blue Rose
By: Noah Eaton
12/15/01

Forget-me-nots whisper in fields of barley
Sister whisteria hums to the baby robin egg morning
A lovely woman of my dreams combs her golden hair
Sitting on the crisp dale in this beguiling meadow of dreams

Her warm skin is a creamy satin peach
Her eyes are satin-laced in gossamer thread
Under His illustrious canopy she lays, innocent in her yearning
Braiding couplets into each sonnet she suspires in her Eden bed

Auburn flame reflects from her hair in the sunshine
The sweet intoxication of passion fills the waft
Natures sweet perfume allures me into her possession
The blue rose of true love awakens to a lover’s hand

On her head I queen her with my hearts diadem
Virginal dreams open before me, seeing new worlds of rapture
I see her smile every night now as I look upon the crescent moon
Tinseled in strands of angel hair, beaded to my pleasure

The cupid has opened the blue rose of my heart to you
Forever’s sapphire is now forever held dear
My eternal promise sings in its oceanic calyx
To forever cherish your love…in every smile and every tear

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-15-2001).]

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2001-12-15 04:48 PM

~The cupid has opened the blue rose of my heart to you
Forever’s sapphire is now forever held dear
My eternal promise sings in its oceanic calyx
To forever cherish your love…in every smile and every tear~

*sigh* you are a real romanticus.....so tender and gentle penned......love it Noah

((hugs))
Charisma

~*Theresia~*

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-12-15 04:50 PM

Noah, this is truly stunning. I mean it. The imagery and everything. You sound so remarkably happy in these lines. GOOD!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

dawn to dusk
Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 68
Colorado

3 posted 2001-12-15 07:10 PM

It flows like music. It's wonderful.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2001-12-15 07:23 PM

This is beautiful, Noah, very beautiful!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-12-15 07:47 PM

Wonderful, my sweet Noah!! Hugs! Nancy.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Daemonyin
Junior Member

since 2001-11-24

Posts 31

6 posted 2001-12-15 11:56 PM

Opening up your heart like that
is something most could never do.
She must be some woman eh?
And so lucky to have you.

That was lame... But your poem was great.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

7 posted 2001-12-16 12:33 PM

This is beautiful writing, Noah

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

8 posted 2001-12-16 02:34 AM

Noah,
You have the girls swooning and kudos from Balladeer! Hmmm...I could get jealous.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

9 posted 2001-12-17 10:15 PM

ah yes, I am swooning over this work of art.
Noah you are so romantic, I wish I had a sweet guy like you.

Hypnosis
Member

since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

10 posted 2001-12-17 10:18 PM

This was a real piece of work Noah!  It is so romantic and beautiful, just like your heart, which expresses itself greatly.  Good work, good friend!

    From your good friend
        Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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