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You are there, here with me. #2 The challenge
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You are there, here with me. #2 The challenge |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston 
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You are there, here with me. Embedded in my memory. Years stretch out in front of me still, you'll be there, here with me. We spoke of life, some fifty years that you'd be here to calm my fears. Who knew the end would be so near, now you are there, and I am here. Save a place right there for me where we can spend eternity. Until this life has set me free, you are there, here with me. Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this brought tears to my eyes! Oh this is so heart felt.....very very gentle  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Lucie, I love this side of you. This is simply beautiful Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
A truly touching piece, you took the challenge and excelled in it. Bill |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lucie, I must say...wow...for someone who is so quick in wit to quip and jest with the best...to see such a serious nature emerge... wow, again...thank you for sharing this! Lady will be so pleased... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo sensitive and pure this lovely poem is, sweet Lucie! (sigh) This poem made me cry to feel the sweetness of your heart and the golden love you have deep down! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you me tthe challenge so beautifully! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lucie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lucie that was a beautiful poem, just beautiful, and I have so many that I wish I had written that for. Thank you. ~*~ May the spirit of this season live in your heart all year through ~*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh yes, this one made the tears flow..so tender and filled with such eternal love. You speak from a heart that is overflowing with love for you dear husband. Magnificent. I love it. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* what a beautiful, beautiful gem you penned here.....moved me deeply. (((hugs))) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lucie, You're getting a little soft girl. But must admit you do it well! |
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