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hple
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0 posted 2001-12-14 10:51 PM




its hard to read my books
dusty stale pages of once known knowledge
forgoten wisdom i still retain
i can feel it happening
short glances of what will be
what once was once is now in reach
flesh will again be a novelty
one with all, all of one
im frightened with joy
the past is an experince
experinces are everything that you are
everything that you will be
everything that you once were
life is just an experince of who you realy are
societys deathgrip on exsisting culutre will soon be broken
all is well, one more droplet into the bucket that is me.

i am not a poet, just some **** i was thinking about.  i wonder if im wrong.


matt



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1 posted 2001-12-14 11:03 PM


Welcome, and this is delightful poetry! Each person is unique, and you've done an excellent job of expressing your unique  individuality here. I'm looking forward to more.
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2 posted 2001-12-14 11:03 PM




BRAVO!!! CLAPPING WILDLY!!! YOUR INSIGHT AND WONDERFUL THOUGHTS SHINE IN THIS POWERFUL DEBUT!!! (big hugggsssss) I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) Welcome to Passions, sweet Matt, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, keep writing! You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-14 11:10 PM



Very impressive first post!
I hope to see more from you soon!
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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4 posted 2001-12-15 01:11 AM


Welcome   I hope you enjoy your time at Passions.. I advise you to read the guidelines you agreed to regarding profanity....it isn't allowed   Please check your email for a special greeting!  
Startime
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5 posted 2001-12-15 12:59 PM


Your words say you are indeed a poet...what is poetry but thoughts and feelings that flow into our minds. Welcome to Passions. I will look forward to more of your writing. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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