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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-12-14 05:33 PM

If my last breath were my next
Let me give it to you to keep.
For my life is yours to hold.

If my next vision were eternal
I would wish to be seeing you.
For you are my only dream.

If I were asked to say a last word.
Knowing that word is all I have.
I would simply say...I love you.

If I could change just one thing
One that would be for all time.
I would keep all as it now is
For with you here, I need nothing.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-12-14 05:41 PM

*sigh* Oh yes, Friday evening and you have me swooning...*sigh* what a wonderful romantic husband you are. Your sweet lady is so very lucky to have a poet whose words fill the blue pages with sweet romance. BRAVO!!! **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-14-2001).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-12-14 05:46 PM

(sigh) Oh Magnus, this is soooooooo beautiful, your heart always shines with such true love and beauty to give! (smiles) If only there could be more people like you who could always be faithful to love and see beauty like you do! (sigh) You are soooooo romantic, dearest friend, may true love forever blossom in your heart! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2001-12-14 05:53 PM

This is so good. Your lady is lucky to have you.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-12-14 07:07 PM

Barry, this is about as good as it gets in expressing what love is.
Thank you this one.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

5 posted 2001-12-14 07:45 PM

I've said it before, and I'll say it again: Despite the fact that I'm not s person for love poems, this was magical!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-12-14 10:24 PM

I know this feeling...and I want to know it again...James

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-12-14 10:44 PM

What a miracle a love like this is. You have restored my faith in love, I think.
Sandra

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-12-14 10:52 PM

Barry, this one is perfect....just perfect!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2001-12-14 10:53 PM

Amen, Brother!

jwesley

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2001-12-14 11:08 PM

Magnus...so sweetly said...someone is indeed lucky!

thepoeticplumber
Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 185

11 posted 2001-12-14 11:09 PM

Love is so alive in your words. It was a true pleasure to read and embrace. Roger

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

12 posted 2001-12-14 11:21 PM

If I had one last wish, it would be to have had someone say those words to me in my lifetime...beautiful, just beautiful.

~*~ May the spirit of this season live in your heart all year through ~*~

JoMason
Member

since 2001-12-07

Posts 57

13 posted 2001-12-15 02:09 AM

Oh Magnus,

You do know how to melt a lady's heart . . .

Someone is very lucky !

JoMason
12/15/01

DarkAngelChelle
Member

since 2001-12-06

Posts 87
Kansas

14 posted 2001-12-15 02:14 AM

What a beautiful expression of love. I enjoyed it very much.

~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

15 posted 2001-12-16 11:45 PM

Magnus-
   Very beautifully said.
   Made my heart smile.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

rebekah33
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 140
MD/NJ

16 posted 2001-12-16 11:55 PM

Ahhhh, the romance, the beauty!!!! What a wonderfully romantic poem.
-R.

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

Hypnosis
Member

since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

17 posted 2001-12-16 11:55 PM

Aw, what a sweet poem MAgnus, it looks like the love you have is a lucky lady, and the love you show her is extraordinary. Keep the love flowing my friend!

Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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