Open Poetry #17 |
Walking In The Twilight |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“WALKING IN THE TWILIGHT” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I went for a walk yesterday when the sun went down, on the path that travels through the darkness of the forest… As I walked alone, I entered a clearing, surrounded by giant redwoods, majestic in being, and I could see the shadows of them touching the ground, as the breeze moved and caressed their limbs… Foreboding I sensed, but even though I walked with them surrounding me, I knew He was there to protect, for I am, His creation… So I walked through the darkness, and the shadows of the forest, as I have so many times before, only now unafraid, for I was walking with Him, together, walking in the twilight… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Yes, yes, His love is always guiding us wherever we walk and wherever we sleep, and His love never fails us! (smiles) May we forever spread our hearts wings and bask in His warm smile! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so evry much! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I love to walk at twilight. The vision you gave me of you walking through the redwoods was stunning. I once wrote a Dream Weaver poem about love in the Redwoods. *sigh* simply magical. Yes, you will always have Him at your side. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill, I enjoyed this. It's wonderful when you can feel a higher power guiding you.. protecting you. Well done Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bill...This is a wonderful write! Reminded me of that song..."You'll Never Walk Alone." One of my favourites....I could just picture you walking out there among the giant redwoods. Fantastic! ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Great write Bill. Never had the redwoods above my head...missing an important part of life I think. jwesley |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
Walking walk God is the best walk in the world. As it says in scripture, we will fear no evil. Very very worthy poem to read. Roger |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful writing Bill...James |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
bill...this is just beautiful...helen |
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JoMason Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 57 |
Bill, Walking in the twilight with God . . . Sounds so peaceful. Very lovely thought. JoMason 12/15/01 |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
Beautiful ... what wonderful imagery with the redwoods ... I could just see the scene in my head. It's always awesome just to know that we are never alone. He is definitely with us for always. Nice write. Thanks for sharing. ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Thank all of you for reading this and for sharing your thoughts in your replies. Thank you again. BC |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Although I'm not a religious person and don't connect to the 'Him', I can see it gave you peace writing as you did and you did it very well Sir Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Moonlight Angel New Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 7 |
(big hugggsssssss) Yes, yes, His love is always guiding us wherever we walk and wherever we sleep, and His love never fails us! (smiles) I love the reply Mistletoe Angel gave. I wholeheartedly (did i spell that right?) with her. I love this poem, it expresses the feelings i have, and i like the pictures your words create. *~Moonlight Angel~* |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Bill, Wonderful imagery in this beauty, and thank you for reminding me that I am not walking through life alone because sometimes I forget, enjoyed so much. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I envisioned a similar moment I had myself and am always amazed at the awe inspired by this world we live in....cool beans amigo! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
We are never alone are we?..God is always with us..his light shining within..lovely bill..enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, Used to live in Fortuna, CA. Too briefly! Love those Redwoods and their image they portray of Him! And loved your poem. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a deviation from your normal wonderful romanticism... It was a delightful read, m'friend... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill this is utterly utterly wonderful. It speaks so clearly of the peace and comfort that is only found from walking in HIS light. Absolutely perfect, this is truly outstanding. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
I thank you all once more for your most heartwarming replies to this humble writing... thank you... BC |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The redwoods are an awesome, daunting lift to our imagination that we are only but a speck in the magnificence of His glory, but for all of that, he has allowed us to grace His creation with our good words... write on Bill, and Merry Christmas! |
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