Open Poetry #17 |
The lost and found of love |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
When I write my last love poem that would be the day that I'll cease loving you How many words can be put into action revealing all my vulnerability and in the end the only thing gained is the debilitation of my soul remaining forever in the lost and found of love [This message has been edited by walker (edited 12-14-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* losing ourselves to love is what we do. We are lost to love and then found. You say it perfectly in this poem. Very well done. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Merry Christmas, Walker, this is a sad write in a way. Kathleen (Kay) |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You will always write of love, walker...it is part of you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Yes, every time we lose love, our hearts will again be found with a happy warm smile of true love! (sigh) Sooooooo bittersweet and beautiful, sweet friend, I love your beautiful words! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Walker, I love this some what sad but so very true poem and the way in which you brought out the feelings involved, wonderful writing. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
You have a very artistic way of reminding us that we need to cherish every moment we have with those who are in our heart. Beautiful. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
The lost and found of love....It seems as if some of us spend more time in the lost dept. A good write, walker. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
That first sentence is perfection... a wonderful write, miss |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I love the way you think..and they way you convey it in your poems. MERRY CHRISTMAS, DARLINGS.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Walker...I seriously doubt that I could ever come up with the words to express this feeling as well as you have here within this poem...I wish that each of us would never experience it... |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
I don't think you'll ever stop writing about the love you're receiving! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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