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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-12-14 11:12 AM



When I write my last
love poem
that would be the day that
I'll cease loving you
How many words can be put into
action revealing
all my vulnerability
and in the end the only
thing gained
is the debilitation
of my soul
remaining
forever
in the lost and found
of love


[This message has been edited by walker (edited 12-14-2001).]

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Startime
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1 posted 2001-12-14 11:20 AM


*sigh* losing ourselves to love is what we do. We are lost to love and then found. You say it perfectly in this poem. Very well done. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-12-14 12:19 PM


Merry Christmas, Walker, this is a sad write in a way.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Duncan
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3 posted 2001-12-14 01:06 PM


You will always write of love, walker...it is part of you.
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4 posted 2001-12-14 06:30 PM




(sigh) Yes, every time we lose love, our hearts will again be found with a happy warm smile of true love! (sigh) Sooooooo bittersweet and beautiful, sweet friend, I love your beautiful words! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Cerenity
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5 posted 2001-12-15 10:38 PM


Hi Walker,

I love this some what sad but so very true poem and the way in which you brought out the feelings involved, wonderful writing.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



amusemi
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6 posted 2001-12-15 10:41 PM


You have a very artistic way of reminding us that we need to cherish every moment we have with those who are in our heart.  Beautiful.
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7 posted 2001-12-15 11:21 PM


The lost and found of love....It seems as if some of us spend more time in the lost dept.
A good write, walker.

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8 posted 2001-12-16 12:44 PM


That first sentence is perfection...

a wonderful write, miss  

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9 posted 2001-12-16 12:53 PM


I love the way you think..and they way you convey it in your poems.  

MERRY CHRISTMAS, DARLINGS....
If you can't find your cup of Christmas cheer, you may have a cup of mine!

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10 posted 2001-12-16 12:27 PM


Walker...I seriously doubt that I could ever
come up with the words to express this
feeling as well as you have here within this
poem...I wish that each of us would never
experience it...

Domzi
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11 posted 2001-12-16 05:01 PM


I don't think you'll ever stop writing about the love you're receiving!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

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