Open Poetry #17 |
Come Back Home |
Doug Pretorius Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 81Ontario, Canada |
Come Back Home December 13, 2001 Copyright 2001 Doug Pretorius Changing everything between us is not what I thought we'd do between me and you I thought we were cool sure an arguement or two, but not to make a fuss Now things I've relied on are slipping away maybe they were never even really there I fell upon my reflection the other day and I couldn't help but stare Looking into my eyes, trying to find a why Searching for meaning and hope finding nothing but soap, nothing to fill the hole So here I stand alone clinching my fists, trying to resist to feel it's all so unreal a separation anxiety reel as I wait by the phone hoping you'll come back home |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
lonliness is never a good feeling, it seems no one is there for you, but just wait, soon there will be, i am sure! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssss) Oh Doug, my heart goes out to your anxiety, for I know how you feel for I too have felt lonely a lot! (sigh) I am sure with all my heart you'll find all the love you're looking for, and you will be happy forever after! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet Doug! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Doug, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You've written pain and sadness well. It's hard to face the mirror and look for answers that just aren't there. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Doug! Enjoyed the read. ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Doug Pretorius Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 81Ontario, Canada |
Thank you, everyone, for your replies. |
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