Open Poetry #17 |
Private Dance, repost from #12 |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Private Dance He is waiting to read this, she knows he is…. like a private letter, between them…. he in her world, she in his… and he makes her want to be his private dancer… in remote chance remoter still the dance but still, for the romance she takes that stance he'll stand the chance and they to take the private dance that one that won't e'er be seen he'll call upon her in midnight dream she'll float to him on wings unseen to hold, then be held in grace, be graced she to smile into his face he to grasp her warm embrace he to take her up by small of back and she to feel his shift and tact his essence she breathes in her perfume, a transient sin her dress of roses pink in glow in sheerest silk her skin does show and length of limb to hip to shoulder keeps the room from getting colder and he in turn, in turn of crest has worn in dream his very best her hand lies there upon his chest in silent beat of love's caress in silence he reads of this, her dream in close of eyes, then it seems she's come to him, again, in romance to take up this, this private dance she'll take the stance he'll stand the chance for this one, most private, dance 01.27.01 |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This deserves a huge ovation... Thanks for the repost, Karilea Regards, Sudhir |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ah....yes dancing in the dreams... very nicely done...glad you reposted!!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--wonderful repost..so beautiful the dance! |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
The dance,so beautiful.Great job. Peaches |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Karilea - I remember this one well. It is wonderful in its reach and its pace. the message begs interpretation by every reader. Well done, Karilea. The whole point of the message is consistent throughout. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, I'm so glad you reposted this so I didn't have to miss the dance. Lovely... ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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