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Desire To Believe
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Desire To Believe |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Desire To Believe Locked within my heart passions burning bright controlled by my will desire to give light Craving a warm touch to feel gentle kiss drowning in his lips sharing lovers bliss Seeking after love hold me tenderly touch me with your words become reality Feed my hunger deep for the love you give desire to believe in your heart I live Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Craving and seeking to touch; those things I can identify with, at times there isn’t enough of those realities. Enjoyed the poem Bill |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
A wonderfully romantic poem.  Juanita |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
I will hold you close Two bodies near My embrace soft yet strong I will say those words You long to hear A desire professed through song   Just a little quickie to keep you all fuzzy through your day. HUGS sweetieTer. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Startime So enchantingly romantic...sometimes to believe, makes it so. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Seeking after love hold me tenderly touch me with your words become reality I've dreamt this same dream. Great write, Karen. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Your desire for love is ever deep...to feel the warmth of one who deeply loves and cares of you...the softness of a kiss shared as each lingering touch is felt....So much passion in your works Star...you write love and romance so well.... |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yes, very passionate, very romantic. Well done. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Seeking after love hold me tenderly touch me with your words become reality I think you've found it! I hope so. And they need to hold on tight. I love the way you've penned these Karen. You are in the glow. Sincerely, Regina |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"desire to believe in your heart I live" You've captured a wonderfully powerful feeling of desire and love here Karen, much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sounds to me like you've got your finger on the pulse of Passion and some of the best parts of things that truly matter... -MVS "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Karen, what a beautiful desire.... God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karen, Nothing wrong with that. Enjoyed your lovely write. *L* |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Believe, ... just believe young lady. *s |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Karen...you write the most beautiful love poems....and this one is certainly no exception. I really love your work!  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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