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amigo
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0 posted 2001-12-13 12:04 PM



This is to you, my dear Vishu,
A precious gem among the few…
Your life surely gave a different view
With all the pictures that you drew….

You were the one I got my lessons from..
The strings of my heart, that you did strum…
But, the tune of my song that I like to hum….
Brings you to me, my dearest chum….

How is it that you're keeping mum?
Why is it that your call was the one, too soon to come?
And why did you have to answer that, to make me glum?
Or is it just in all our kismet, simply to succumb….

I miss you a lot, my dear gal…
You're the one I would love to call…
But, relax & rest assured, my sweet pal….
For, I am just learning to take it all…
'Cause, YOU ARE THERE HERE WITH ME!!!
…..(but, I do miss you…...)

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Friends, this is in memory of my sweet sister-in-law, Vishu, who really had the call too soon…...
25 seasons is all she bloomed, but the fragrance will be around for a long time to come…
Thank you for reading…..I know she is smiling…for she is there here with me…...


© Copyright 2001 amigo - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2001-12-13 12:06 PM


This is a remarkable poem...

Regards,
Sudhir

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-12-13 12:07 PM



Amigo, I am so glad you've come to join the Passions family, because I am going to enjoy watching you write your heart...

Thank you for this.  Lady will be SO pleased!

SEA
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3 posted 2001-12-13 12:08 PM


this is a wonderful way to do the challenge  
Rogue24
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4 posted 2001-12-13 12:15 PM


A very beautiful tribute indeed!

Open your heart
Receive her love
Her angelic form so true
Keep your smile
Upon your face
For she is there with you.

Happy Holidays and God Bless!
Hugs
Ter.

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

Startime
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5 posted 2001-12-13 01:25 PM


*sigh* a beautiful and heartfelt tribute. You touched my heart with your words. Magnificently done for the challenge too. BRAVO!!! **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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6 posted 2001-12-13 05:44 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Amigo, this was such a touching and beautiful tribute to your sweet Vishnu, I love it! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, love and compassion fills your challenge! We all love you so very much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet amigo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2001-12-13 06:00 PM



Amigo, welcome to the fold, for those who take up challenges, are Keepers.  As are you.  As is this.  Well done!

amigo
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8 posted 2001-12-13 10:14 PM


Sudhir - Thank you my friend for your words...  

Karilea - Thank you for your lovely words...you're right...i do feel lucky to have joined this family of Passions...  

Susan - Thank you for stopping by to tell me how you felt....  

Ter - Thank you for your sweet words and your sweeter poem too...Thank you for the wishes & happy holidays to you too...  

Startime - Thank you for your hugs & kisses...I really needed them....& thank you for your kind words....

Noah - Thank you my friend for your warm-hearted & beautiful words....

Lady In White - Thank you for the lovely inspire...and for welcoming me into the fold...

luv & hugs,
amigo

[This message has been edited by amigo (edited 12-14-2001).]

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