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Nan
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0 posted 2001-12-12 09:10 PM


On the twelfth day of Christmas my true love gave to me
         

Twelve school days' vacation


Eleven cards to sent out


Ten gifts still not bought yet


Nine still needing wrapping


Eight poems to read in Workshop


Seven mods in Open
         

Six Deputies need training


Five long lines to stand in


Four more hours till stores close


Three merry little munchkins


Two days left for shopping


and
A forum full of Passions poetry


     

Hang in there






[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 12-12-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-12 09:17 PM



What a charming giggle [psst,Teach, I see one TYPO] and GLAD to see you hard at it!

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2 posted 2001-12-12 09:19 PM


LOVE this!!    


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3 posted 2001-12-12 09:24 PM



Nan-
  Wunnerful, wunnerful!
  I love it!
  Hugs,
  ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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4 posted 2001-12-12 09:55 PM


Cute!..good luck for your shopping though...
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5 posted 2001-12-12 09:59 PM


Ah geesh, did you have to remind me??? I’ve barely started yet. Love this though, it’s so cute. All these Christmas poems round here…well, I’m almost starting to get into the season!!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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6 posted 2001-12-12 10:11 PM


Nan!  This is soooo cute!
Just reminds me that there isn't too much time left to get everything done!!
Loved this!  ~Hugs, Nancy~  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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7 posted 2001-12-12 11:27 PM


cute and creative

glad to see you out there writing, not just reading

we miss you...here's a smooch from us both

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8 posted 2001-12-13 01:33 AM


Very adorable Nan, and hey...welcome back, where were you hiding   - must have been out doing all that Christmas shopping as I haven't seen you on the pages (missed ya).  Now how long did this take to do, LOL...but it was worth it, loved it!

~*~  May the spirit of this season live in your heart all year through ~*~


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9 posted 2001-12-13 01:51 AM


It was almost warm today, it can't be nearly Christmas.  Loved it, Nan.
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10 posted 2001-12-13 02:53 AM


Nan,
You party girl you. Thanks for the invite!

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11 posted 2001-12-13 04:17 AM


Nan, Nan, Nan - now I haven't even started yet. What to do, what to do, I ask....

BC Inc...

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12 posted 2001-12-13 06:49 AM


This is marvy, ! What a happily delightful redo/retake of the a Christmas tradition, but you should sing this for us too.
Truly enjoyable

Nan
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13 posted 2001-12-13 07:12 AM


Thank you, my Passionate friends... This is a rewrite of a rewrite.. of a traditional holiday jingle... Sing?...I'd get myself fired...
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14 posted 2001-12-13 07:15 AM


ROFL ... ahhhhhh Nan ... what a marvelous presentation! You've got me grinning from ear to ear over here. I love the "seven mods in Open", LOL, heck, I love them all!  What a wonderful Christmas treat from you this morning ... big, big hugs to you!!!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Nan
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15 posted 2001-12-13 07:18 AM


... and to you, Kit - I couldn't have done it without you...
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16 posted 2001-12-13 09:23 AM


Nan,
Light and airy, I'll send you a fairy. Much *L* Sy

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17 posted 2001-12-13 09:43 AM


Nan

Very cute and humorous!

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18 posted 2001-12-13 10:23 AM


I love this one absolutely wonderful a fabulous Christmas ditty

    
Love and warm stuff
Happy Holidays
Marsha
    

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Nan
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19 posted 2001-12-14 09:28 PM


Thanks, Poet People...

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