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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-11-13 01:45 AM

Secrets of A Smile

Tell them how
you made me
fall in love
with you.

"I smiled at you."

And what happened
after that?

"You smiled back."

Then I knew love could
be yours and mine
until the end of time
if I could capture
the secret of
those smiles.

JamesLee
November12
2001

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2001-11-13 01:54 AM

Now that must have been one very fantastic smile, James. Very nicely done! I also liked the visual presentation of this one.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2001-11-13 05:14 AM

Ah, the secret in a smile ... captivating indeed. Much enjoyed James.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

3 posted 2001-11-13 07:14 AM

very enjoyable one...

James, my friend,
My regards to you,
Sudhir

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

4 posted 2001-11-13 07:27 AM

James,

Sweet read James

I enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2001-11-13 08:39 AM

(smiles) And forever and ever, you and Jin will smile together, for your sweet love is real and pure. (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are soooooooo romantic! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-11-13 09:15 AM

how wonderful James

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2001-11-13 06:54 PM

*sigh* isn't it amazing what a simple smile can do. I love this poem, James.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2001-11-13 07:19 PM

Like the shining loving eyes of a faithful
pet...us humans use a smile to say and do
so much as a nonverbal communication.

Smiles mean a lot to me....I try to always
give them away frequently....

Nice...enjoyed.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2001-11-13 07:52 PM

SBJ...this ones beauty is in its simply succinct sweet sincerety...
love the last lines intend and pondering.
well done poet sir

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
In the sunlight, in the shadows ...
No ... I'll never stop looking for you.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2001-11-13 08:07 PM

Loved this poem just about as much as I love smiles!
I collect them!

~Smiles and hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

11 posted 2001-11-14 01:19 AM

James,
So the eyes weren't even a clue? Come on! That's alot of smile.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

12 posted 2001-11-15 08:46 AM

Smilin' here. Well done, James

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