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0 posted 2001-12-12 02:15 PM


Inside grey soul, no worries
                       shhhhh! no worries
Silence as alone amongst tall trees, bear hear
  to secrets of centuries, the unseen mystique of nature in her own world.
           without taint of human eyes or ears, only perfect creation, as only to itself

No voice speaks limits or death, Mother knows no boundaries
  As bright stars of count to salt, lay witness of time's eternal task to view and verse all
  From blue sky to blue sea
     and fields of green, and final red to black
     to ground again, nature's best friend.

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1 posted 2001-12-12 02:19 PM


Absolutely stunning. I love it. Very well done. The vision was perfect...you gave the tree a soul. Magnificent. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-12-12 03:05 PM


wow, this is so beautiful   I really like the way you did this  
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3 posted 2001-12-12 03:15 PM






(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, your loving heart sings of Mother Nature's greatest gift. (sigh) May the trees stand and sing in glory always! (sigh) We all love you so very much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-12-15 04:12 PM


Beautiful Song.....love it  

Charisma

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