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The Twinkle In Your Eyes
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The Twinkle In Your Eyes |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
When I gaze eye to eye with you at night, The sound of love is not the pound of heart, It’s sighs so soft with tenderness so light, The flutter of lashes before we start. Loving look in the twinkle in your eyes, Captures my gaze in lost eternity, Says to me of love that words only tries, Having you here is all reality. The twinkle in your eyes is all the light, The sigh from your sweet lips is all the sound, How can I not remember this delight Of the passion and meaning I have found. Laying beside me in the deep of night, In the comfort of feeling not of sight. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You're on a roll...I get the feeling that you might not have been writing up until this point, and have so much in you that wants to come out. This is a Good Place for you to be, here with Passions in Poetry... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* what wonderful romance to start the day with. Your love flows with gentle tenderness that bathes the heart is a soft warm mist. *sigh* your poems make me feel romantic. Magnificent. **hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this much  |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Lady in White, A nurse maybe? Seems I’ve been left with much time alone, and I find for now writing is a nice way to fill the void. It feels like a good place, and a friendly place. Startime, This was actually an ending of a day, but I think I know what you mean, being as you are reading this in your morning. A tender comes from the memory of the tenderness, and maybe the longing for it to be more often. Bill |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Vandana, You slipped in while I was responding to the other nice people here, I wouldn’t want to miss you for your response in kindness, Thank you. Bill |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Son, you are sooooooo romantic, your loving words always whisper to the heart in so many ways in your lovely sonnets! (sigh) We all love you so very much, sweet friend, may the twinkle in your loves eyes forever shine to you! (sigh) Soooooooo lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Son, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is wonderfully written... Regards, sudhir |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Oh gosh,my heart just melted reading this.So very romantic  Juanita  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm pretty speechless here, I guess my imagination is in overdrive...I do hope you have more Kathleen (Kay) |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Noah, What a wonder response and so festive too Sudhir, My thanks to you Juanita Melting can be nice on a cold day, I hope you have someone to catch the drips Kay, I might be able to rustle up a couple of more, but I understand 2 a day is the limit, so I’ll have to post another tomorrow. Don’t worry about being speachless, sometimes the best communications are said without a single sound. Bill |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm bumping you, I hope you don't mind  Kathleen (Kay) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my! Oh Sigh! This is soooo romantic!! What wonderful romantic words....YES!! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Superbly written....much enjoyed this... Sonnet away when ready.... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
In the comfort of feeling not of sight. What a lovely way of putting it. Beautiful words, beautiful feelings. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Kay, I hardly felt it, could you get a little closer on that bump. This is just a figurative bump? You red-haired girls are so playful, and sweet too. Enchantress, You must be romantic yourself, because the say you have to be one to know one. I’ll take romance in any time. Mangus You are kind with your praise, I will try to write a few more. This place is an inspiration to the writer with so many fine examples about. Tracey, Sometimes I get lucky with my expression, but it always seems to not be enough. I always have a word or two more I want to say. Your words are a comfort to me in thinking I might have got it said right. James, Glad you did. Bill |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
The twinkle in your eyes is all the light, The sigh from your sweet lips is all the sound ============= Ahh this is so beautiful. This must be just exactly what love is like. Good job, I look forward to reading more from you, I bet you have more where this came from. Go ahead, push your luck; find out how much love the world can hold |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Apachecat906, I have a few more of these hanging around, seems something pops up everytime I’m near a lovely lady, and special ladies even more so. I’m just trying to reflect some of the beauty Bill |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I read a lot of your poetry this evening and wondered where on earth you have vanished too, your work is very enjoyable. Carpe' Diem |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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