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Short Sunsetpoem
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Short Sunsetpoem |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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 And on the shortest day the sun will embrace this church when she's moving to your side of the earth A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
Delicate, soft, lovely! Emily |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Titia, this is really pretty  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ Sweet friend ... this is GORGEOUS~ Love and hugs to you for the imagery in this piece~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Titia, your words shine like the sun! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet Titia! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Very touching. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
How very beautiful this poem is in presentation and content. I love it. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Beautiful as always Titia. You must live in one of the most beautiful places on earth If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love it! Thanks for sharing your sunset, Titia. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Beautifully said... Regards, Sudhir |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwwwwww Titia this is beautifully penned.....love it Charisma |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Cool to think, it's the same sun...here and there. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Perfect! |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
I really love this Titia, it should be "Short and Sweet Sunsetpoem" Its just so perfect in its simplicity, like the sunset, but it says so much. I love that no matter how far away one person is from the next, we still share the same sun, and so much more. You captured this well. Thanks for showing me your part of the world. Go ahead, push your luck; find out how much love the world can hold |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful words for such a perfect image. Short sweet and very lovely. Hugs. Ter Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thank you my dear friends. I'll show you by the time she's embracing the church (hope there will be no clouds that night) HUGS to you all Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What a beautiful piece of the world you live in, Titia!  |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Very beautiful with such few words. Peaches |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Titia- This is truly beautiful, my friend. You never cease to amaze me with the beauty of your words and the photos of your homeland. Thanks so much for sharing this beauty. Hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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