Open Poetry #17 |
I Cannot Imagine Losing You |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I cannot imagine losing you, not having you. I don’t think my mind could endure it. Just thinking of it brings a flood of tears. My heart skips You are part of me. Can be no other way. Rivers of thoughts have flown before us. Mountains of memories have grown. A lifetime of love dwells within us. You, dearest are my soul’s breath. The glowing light of a full moon shines in you. Your eyes reflect the brightest stars. Words of love from your lips caress me. My tears no longer flow free. Times of struggle have long been endured A bond of love our shield. Our hearts beat as one eternally Passions flow at just your sight. Leave me not alone, for I will die without you. Let me caress your mind as you do remain. Give me a moment to always hold you. Let our love, stronger, lift us high. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
How very beautiful - some lady is very lucky to have such love from you. ...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Icequeen...thank you....No...I am the lucky one....she blessed me with her presence. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Magnus, I couldn't ever imagine it either, with a beautiful loving heart such as yours! (sigh) You deserve eternal happiness, and love is bound to fill your heart with rapture forever! (smiles) We all love you so very much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Magnus, Just beautiful. I feel this way everytime I even think of my life without my love. Thank you for sharing.. it was wonderful. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Noah once again... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tara, you have always spoken so well of my words...I am pleased that you enjoy them. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, this is how it should be.....definitely! You are blessed as is your wife! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* penned from a loving and sincere heart. To have such love as this is my Christmas wish. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you are just so darn romantic you make me sigh and just smile this is beautiful!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kay.....Yep, I have a wonderful woman here. Most of the time I love her deeply... Occasionally....we get miffed....but we always come thru it...She is my pillar of strength and I am hers.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OK Karen....one clone ordered....due in next week...should arrive by December 24th... Cost...2 Loonies and one Twoonie...think you can come up with that...??? Thanx.. BTW...you will have to teach the clone how to write poetry....I am not giving that away....Not ever. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh geeee...Sue...so pleased to see your wonderful remarks....have missed them terribly....thanx...Yep. me the romantic. I truly is one.....But I am still learning more each day of how to express my romantic feelings.. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
well just keep sharing them with us!! good grief you make us ladies swoon all men should be so romantic |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Magnus...everyone needs someone to feel this way about them. Thsi is truly between soulmates. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue...chuckling I am...and I do so much enjoy writing how I feel. Thank you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Dan...I do appreciate your thoughts.. 35 years we have been together....With a lot of bumps in the middle...learning to love even at our age.. |
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