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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-12-11 03:45 PM


Fill my heart with tenderness, my arms with you.
Give my soul a sweet caress, let it become true.
Keep me in your fondest dreams, as you sleep.
Loving you is all I want, A treasure I do keep.

Lift my eyes to your own, your gaze I feel.
Give me thoughts of love, which become real.
Find a place where I may be, and I comfort you.
Pleasure I do give thee, for this I’ll forever do.

Lift the cloud of loneliness, let the flowers grow.
As we live in togetherness, letting passions go.
Share an endless romance, as visions we share.
Drive me truly senseless, as only we do dare.

Come to streams of water pure, bathe as we flow
Laughter which does endure, merrily we go.
Kiss my lips of pure wine, let the passions fly
Help me harvest the vine, for love will never die.

© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-11 04:19 PM


I wish there were another word for beautiful, but I cannot think of one!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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2 posted 2001-12-11 04:23 PM


Kay....I think you picked a good word for it.
Thank You.

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3 posted 2001-12-11 04:31 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Magnus, this is soooooo lovely! (smiles) May you forever quench the wine of eternity with the love of your life! (sigh) This is soooooooo lovely, sweet friend, I too wish there were more words like "beautiful" to describe this too! (sigh) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-12-11 04:46 PM



Sometimes there are poets who write for all; sometimes there are poets who write for one.  You write for one, and share with all.

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5 posted 2001-12-11 05:08 PM


Noah...thank you for your always kind words.
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6 posted 2001-12-11 05:09 PM


Lady in White....I must say that you are
very perceptive in your thoughts...That is
truly what I do.  Thank You.

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7 posted 2001-12-11 07:46 PM


*sigh* sensual romance that flows into the heart warming it like a fine wine. I love it, Magnus. Magnificent. **hugs**  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2001-12-11 08:35 PM


Thank you Karen...your thoughts always touch
my heart.  Glad you enjoyed.

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