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Open Poetry #17

you!!!!!!!!!!!

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

0 posted 2001-12-11 11:30 AM

When morning comes in a glare of pain
YOU: in secret in my heart remain
And I wait through a rain filled day and wish
That a way to love you might still exist
No pasion knocks at the gate
Of this pain filled room in which I wait
But i would climb these walls in blood
To touch , to know , to taste
Your love

This poem is unsigned
It is in my thick reporters note pad along with dozens of other poems .Most I wrote and wished I hadnt .Some are well known classic poems. .Others are copied from pip talk because I like them
I am not sure which this is
so if it is yours please claim it
if you can recognise it
please name it
arthur
anyway .it is a nice poem and I am happy to share it with you all

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-12-11 11:41 AM

This is simply dazzling, Arthur (or Michael?)
simply wonderful.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-12-11 12:32 PM

Arthur/Michael, thank you for allowing as this poem might not be yours, as you stated, "it is unsigned". I've done a search, and it very well could have been penned by yourself in your notebook.

Do take care in making sure that you only post your own poems, and all of Passions will thank you for that. Now, write on!

RosePetal