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Listen to the Breeze
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Listen to the Breeze |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Listen to the Breeze I launched some words upon the breeze Among the flowers, through the trees They danced a dance and echoed slack The last three words of love me back. I sent them on the wind to free Because they would not silent be. They fired on my brain and tongue And burned my mouth like pepper stung. Although I am not infantile My wit has gone to juvenile. I hang naïve and don’t believe The love I have, I can achieve. It is a love of dreamers real Beyond the real of age appeal It is a love of residue Only given to very few. The all of what the echo lacked Was could you, would you, love me back. |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Oh yes..Sweet Sy..a simple request done in such a way that only you can do it.  enjoyed! I am many. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your writing keeps getting better, young man This is so charming Love you back Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Siofa, Thank you sweet lady. Elizabeth, Speaking of charm, you head my list. Love ya Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Would I ... could I ... love you back? Why--I would love you in a sack ... live in a palace or a shack light of day or night so black I'll engrave your name upon a plaque!! Would I ... could I ... love you more? Why--I would love you in a store love you more than the day before love you right down to your core even if you roar when you snore!! Would I ... could I ... love you still? Why--I would love beyond until love you like a dreamers thrill in hot of summer or winters chill If you were ill ... I'd be your pill!! Would I ... could I ... love you then? Why--I would love you there and back again love you and your chinny chin chin in a dragon's den or in Eden's glen Love you till you say Amen!! So should you ask ... Would I ... could I ... love you back? Even though my rhymes might lack ... For this stack--Dr. Suess might want to attack ... So consider this a poetic pact ... even should the moon crack ... Someone always loves you back!! *winkiewinkie* See how you inspire!! (scary sometimes--aint it)  ROFL  me |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: Good to know that love knows no age... Congrats on the 9000th post, Sy... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful! (sigh) It is soooooo beautiful how the breeze can say so much and touch your heart! (smiles) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may eternal love fill your heart. (big hugggsssss) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Your poem was a delight, almost a fright. You have turned my preen to phantom scheme And I will see you in your dreams. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. Sunshine, You will always be my sunshine. *L* Mistletoe, You are a delight. Thank you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Dr Suess's lawyers just called *L*and I came back cuz I forgot 2 things ... to put this in my library.... and to say ..... OHHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dear Tinkerbell, I can't wait for our dream. WW R S |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
yes thats all a lot of us have echoes of love but better than than nothing!!!!!!!!! arthur |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Arthur, We always have dreams, thank you for the read. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your last line is the question every heart whispers as it gives its love... This is just beautiful, Seymour!!! And rofg at JM's response... wistfulness just lost it to giggles. *G* |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Seymour,you seem so sweet how could anyone not love you?I really enjoyed this!   Juanita  |
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water_stained_wisdom Junior Member
since 2008-03-07
Posts 28 |
I launched some words upon the breeze Among the flowers, through the trees They danced a dance and echoed slack The last three words of love me back. I sent them on the wind to free Because they would not silent be. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~   these remnants of a voice and smile, |
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