Open Poetry #17 |
Poker Face |
icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Time has moved so quick yet slow Though I have lived it I do not know Where I have been or where I’ll go Yesterday peers back at me Tomorrow beckons quietly With sorrow in my pocket Joy placed in a locket on a chain round my neck another card off the deck Time has moved so quick yet slow Do I fold or hold or show? It’s five card no peek So I raise and call Bet it all © icequeen 2001 ...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Nice entrance ... "Yesterday peers back at me" very interesting verse... and WELCOME TO PASSIONS... and have a great stay here ... Regards, Sudhir |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow, this is a great entrance to the forum. You will enjoy playing here. Just watch out for the jokers. |
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JoMason Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 57 |
Icequeen, I'm betting on you! Welcome to Passions! Jo Mason 12/10/01 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
ice queen, you're on a winner with this roll Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
icequeen... I'm not clever enough to come up with witty card jokes. But I loved your words. Welcome to Passions! Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
thank you for your poem I liked the element of sadness arthur |
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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
it seems I know you but then don't well done enjoyed..and welcome |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! (smiles) And you come in with a winning hand of love!!! (big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, we're all so lucky to read your wonderful beautiful words! (sigh) Welcome to Passions, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more from your loving heart! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed this. I have indeed felt like I've been shuffled a few times too many, if you know what I mean! Kathleen (Kay) |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Thank you all for your kindness. I don't write often anymore, and have just begun to feel as though I want to. Your works inspire me, however, so perhaps I will be able to find more to write. I appreciate the warm welcome I received here. ...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you bet!!! that's the way to do it! can't win much if you don't take risks and up the ante, raise the bid, fill up that pot, y'know? penny ante stuff ain't worth the time.... life is decked out with suprises, joys, beauty, so the deal is, ya gotta play the hand if ya wanna win!!!! well said here, icequeen .... !! welcome to the blue pages.... looking forward to reading more |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Being a poker player myself I enjoyed the comparison of poker and life.Very well done! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well done first post! I shall look forward to more of your work. I am sure you will love it here! ~Hugs, Nancy Lee~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Welcome to Passions! Such good work here! Can't wait to see more of what you have to offer. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions icequeen! What a wonderful first post, full of depth and pondering. Very much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The only way to live ... bet it all! Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more of your work Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Welcome to Passions, icequeen..much enjoyed seeing your play in poetry. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Welcome!!! I hope you are enjoying it around here. There are so many wonderful poets here! Very nice 1st post! RP |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Welcome and amazing entrance! Your write reflects the way I have looked at life lately, if you cant risk it all, what really do you have to gain? HUGS! Ter. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is creative writing icequeen...James |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!! You sure deal a great poem. BRAVO!!!Welcome to Passions...you will find that everyone here is filled with the love of this season. I will be looking forward to many more of your poems. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-10-2001).] |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
I enjoyed your poem and welcome to passions. I look foward to see more of your work. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I enjoyed this very much and look forward to reading more from you! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Welcome! Welcome! Welcome! I hope you like it here. We've got a lot of stud and a bit of hold 'em but we deal straight and we'll always give you a big hand for your efforts. Your deal.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
this is cute...welcome to Passions....7 card stud anyone? |
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