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With every breath (Tanka)
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With every breath (Tanka) |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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A breath of fresh air Invades me when I'm alone Released from just you As If you are my window Letting in sunshine of life  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Absolutely beautiful. I love it. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awwww  this is wonderful |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Joanna, Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!! Omg this is just sooo sweet I love it!! Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Such a lovely piece.... and here is another rainbow for you..  Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Very sweetly wrote! Life with love doesnt get any sweeter! HUGS!  Ter.! Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Just beautiful. You do these very good. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* Yes...I have seen your writing grow, and I love it.  Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (kiss on lips) Soooooooo beautiful! (kiss on lips) With every breath may we share a love so divine! (kiss on lips) Mmmmmmm...I love you so so much, sweet rose, you will always be the girl of my dreams! (kiss kiss) You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwwwww how sweet.......love it. Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
As you write each tanks, it gets better and better. Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Joanna, Aren't you too young to do this so well? Huh? Wow! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You are learning well....nicely done RP.. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I know someone who will truly treasure this one, as I do, and I shall whisk her in soon to see it for herself! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Elegant in it's simplicity! Well done! Kathleen (Kay) |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Thank You dear friends! Your comments made my day! I learned how to write tanka's from Noah, my mistletoe Angel! RP |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yes, this is very good. Enjoyed very much. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is a beautiful Tanka RosePetal. Well done. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Great job. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
RosePetal - may I borrow some words from you? These are most beautiful... BC |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Very beautiful poem you have here Joanna! Short, sweet and romantic. I love it, your words speak woth love and tenderness! Your friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Thanks again all! Bill: Hi sweetie, I'll lend you whatever you desire dear friend. E mail me anytime Randy: you are so very sweet and caring. Keep those poems of yours coming because I love them. |
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