Open Poetry #17 |
Love is a tease |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
How do you heal what cannot be seen How do you cure what cannot bleed Love what an emotion that breaks the heart in miniscule pieces and some parts are lost forever Even if you try to mend it you'll never feel the same Love what a bittersweet seduction Love what a tease To let you feel the love so deep and just take off forever |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
most painful and yet so wanted...love is quite complicated....*sigh* I don't know if you are writing of your own ache or not, but if you are (((hugs))) I hope you find healing |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* yes, it is. Something so very desired and so hard to find...and when we think we have found it we just find out it was fantasy. My heart goes out to you...I know your pain. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I know this feeling too well. ((Hugs to you)) I hope you aren't experiencing this! Love is tricky, love is blind |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Even if you try to mend it you'll never feel the same It does lose something once it needs mending. Up to us to determine how many stitches are worth our time and effort, especially if they are just to be ripped out again. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
walker, Sounds like the voice of experience to me. So much truth. But some how the rewards out weight the risks and the pain. The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A sad one, and yet, it is a true part of love. Mending broken seams never seems to bring it back to the whole of what it was. At least, that's the way it was for me. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I tend to find myself getting too desperate while reaching for love when perhaps I should be reaching for friendships and letting love happen in its due time... James |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
I know this feeling, but it gets better with age! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Walker, I can feel the sorrow behind your words! Love can indeed be quite a bittersweet experience, but love is also a beautiful feeling, and as long as we listen to what makes our heart happy, our dreams, love is meant to be! (sigh) My heart is with you, sweet friend, I wish for the most beautiful love to fill your heart forever! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You have written well the emotions that many of us at one time or another have felt. Sometimes very very deeply.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Walker...very well done! Excellent write! Hugs, Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Carol Luna Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 55 |
yes, I felt the emotion in this...oh yes Carol Luna |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I know all too well how this feels - you write it so vividly! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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