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Mistletoe Angel

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0 posted 2001-12-09 09:35 PM

(Inspired by Rosepetals25, Sven, and Irish Rose)

Gorgeous Love Senryus
By: Noah Eaton
12/9/01

My Promise

I will promise you
Eternal felicity
Every day with you

Besame

Besame mucho
Under the ruby twilight
Mi mamasita

Dawn’s Soliloquy

Dawn’s soliloquy
Melts lovers in F-minor
Softening in harped sighs

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-09-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved

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1 posted 2001-12-09 09:41 PM

Beautifully done!

I am many.

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2 posted 2001-12-09 09:43 PM

Noah,

If in anyway inspired these beauties, I'm honored. They are wonderful

I love them.

Hugs,
Tara

Umm.. as long as I have your attention.. are you on msn? I have a question lol

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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3 posted 2001-12-09 10:02 PM

Hi sweetness! These are beautiful for sure! Besame, te quiero sentir tus lavios!

love you

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4 posted 2001-12-09 10:02 PM

wonderful Noah!!! nothing like a good senryu to make a night. . .

I'm honored to be an inspiration. . .

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5 posted 2001-12-09 10:08 PM

You named these right Noah! GORGEOUS!!!
~hugs, Nancy~

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6 posted 2001-12-09 10:09 PM

Nice and happy, I like this for my last poem before I go to sleep.

Sandra

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7 posted 2001-12-09 10:10 PM

I love these, specially the mamasita part

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with you

8 posted 2001-12-09 10:17 PM

very nice Noah

I enjoyed these

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9 posted 2001-12-09 10:32 PM

Very nicely done my good friend.  You are one inspired person, and your words show it!

      From your good friend
          Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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