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Phantom Lover
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Phantom Lover |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Phantom Lover I gaze in eyes that flash with fire entranced by scorching heat Such lustful visions they inspire locked in this dream so sweet Strong arms hold me in hot embrace as flames flow in our veins With burning lips his face I trace and drink wine kiss contains With gentle touch he lets me know feelings from deep within His soft caress sets me aglow as a flush lights my skin A deep moan from inside is heard to him I surrender A phantom lover much preferred with his touch so tender Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Karen - how this one got to the second page is, ???? This is most beautiful, and deserves a little more response... BC |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
**hugs** thank you, Bill. I am so glad you liked it. **hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good grief! Where this one went so fast is beyond me! And...you know how much I love your tales of the Phantom Lover!! hugs.  "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Karen, I'm glad Bill found this one and brought it back to the top I love this.. you write so well Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Very beautifully written Startime.... I really like your work Till next time... Timothys angel Dont let it end like this, tell them I said something. ~Pancho Villa |
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