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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
En Passant * A winsome moon; not round and single, but cleaved as if intuitively it knew that my friend and I were about to excuse ourselves from the dining room table, and, with the board, settle in beside the window. * En Passant: French. In chess, to capture 'in passing'. RMW |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Magnificent. There is something so gentle about this poem. It filled me with a feeling of softness. Very well done.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Thank you. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent work, RMW. All writing comes |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Startime said it right. There is something comfortable and soothing in these words...pleasurable to read... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...my friend hung his coat on the moon's tip and settled in for the spell... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob...Thanks for leaving the curtains open, for the moon and I. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Nice one, Bobby... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
such consise, succinct, impact and imagery... very well done poet sir... good to read you again. Ice covers my soul |
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