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Rick
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0 posted 2001-12-09 06:59 AM




With all that beauty shares its gaze
As seasons change and time its ways
Beauty temps, then says goodbye
Gone but for ones memories eye

© Copyright 2001 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-09 07:45 AM



Rick, you say so much, with so few words...and I find they always become treasured Keepers...

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2 posted 2001-12-09 11:37 AM


Wonderful reflections here Rick. Your brevity suits you well and your words are always a gift.

Sincerely,
Regina

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3 posted 2001-12-09 11:45 AM


Rick,
Well done, have a happy

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4 posted 2001-12-09 11:52 AM


Beautifully said!!!!

Charisma

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