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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2001-12-09 06:40 AM

Day and Night

The day speaks loudly of itself
in brandishing it’s face
The night slips silent as an elf
in shadows of it’s grace

The sun will force the eye to know
What every eye has seen
The stars will just reflect their glow
in eyes that have a dream

The sun puts on a splendid show
from dawn til evening comes
The moon shines but a subtle glow
to which the heart succumbs

Elizabeth Santos

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-12-09 06:42 AM

beautiful words, as seen through eyes that hold dreams *s

~Wynter

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-12-09 07:30 AM

I've often been told to read Passions' best, and you are why I do....

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2001-12-09 01:49 PM

In my humble opinion, you are Passions' finest writer and I mean that sincerely, Liz.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-12-09 01:55 PM

(smiles) Soooooooo beautifully spellbinding! May we embrace each day with joy in the sun and dream every night away with the stars as companions! (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet Elizabeth, I too think you have incredible talent! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend! You hav esuch a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

5 posted 2001-12-09 01:59 PM

it is always delightful to read your poetry, and I agree with Sunshine and Auguste, you Are truly one of the finest writers!

Charisma

~*Theresia~*

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LadySofia
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 238
FL., USA

6 posted 2001-12-09 03:44 PM

Might I ask of your permission to use your lovely verse in my novel? Full credit is yours for the taking, my dear. Please email me if you find interest in this. Otherwise, I enjoyed this very very much! Right into my library it goes...

^_^ LadySofia

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-12-09 03:51 PM

Elizabeth....this is exquisite! ~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

8 posted 2001-12-09 04:06 PM

Wynter, Thank you for reading and for your remarks

Sunshine, And you are one of the reasons I write. Thank you for always being there

Michael, Again you honor me with your words, and they mean so much
Thank you

Noah, NOah, Noah,
You are always on a poetry high, and your enthusiasm is inspiring. Thank you for reading and for comment in so many poems

Charisma. Such kind words, Thank you

Lady Sophia, Thank you. Look for an e-mail

Liz

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

9 posted 2001-12-09 04:07 PM

Nancy, Thank you for that exquisite word
Liz

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2001-12-09 06:27 PM

Elizabeth - you see through your eyes, and write what you see. Excellent...

BC

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