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Sunshine Silver
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Sunshine Silver |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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Sunshine Silver Time goes on and still there's no room for anyone else I don't know how I've managed to get where I am Don't want to lose the visions that could pass me by trying to analyze it now Just I know loving you is how I make my stand... Sometimes my days find myself in that difficult moment to explain But, if I had to choose the words to describe my lips unwillingness to speak I'd have to keep in mind the only heart that's ever touched all that I own So, I'd choose sunshine silver and it's way it just lingers with me... You are the sunshine that's permanent and so very radiant to this girl It has stained me and can never be removed Oh, and you are the iridescent silver that shimmers from your own direct light So beautifully seen when I look at you... You have my heart and yet I even have your hand I've never known the best of two worlds all at once I'm not that weak girl in all ways when you're included, you see Because you're the only dream that completes my sun... I may fall and I do when that rain I speak of falls down But, I get up, even if it's just a second, over time Understand if I become greedy with the night with wanting only you at my side Because I can't imagine closing my eyes without your hand in mine... I am eager to know what many get to experience in their life And, forgive me if I wish it was you that could show me it But, know my fear lies in others but not one minute with you Just I could never find the words to explain you this... But, if I were to tell you how perfectly warm you are Would it cause my sunshine silver to wander far? No response I need please but God I wish you could be my first Sunshine silver, would you believe, it wouldn't hurt?... *Sauni* @~~>~~> Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Sometimes my days find myself in that difficult moment to explain But, if I had to choose the words to describe my lips unwillingness to speak I'd have to keep in mind the only heart that's ever touched all that I own So, I'd choose sunshine silver and it's way it just lingers with me" That is so beautiful Sauni! May your siver sunlight smile on you every day. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
may you always walk in that sunlight. . . wonderfully done. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Saunni, your beautiful heart always reflects sunshine to us all and you are a friend in us all! (smiles) Your heart is sunshine silver, with love pure and compassionate and delicate as can be, and your words always reflect your love! (sigh) You are a true angel to us all, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful this enchanting poem is! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* LADY! Your writing just reaches in and grabs me every single time I read! I LOVE THIS! Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
How pretty! A two reader for me....read it once and liked it so much I read it again. Love the Title by the way! ~timothys angel |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You write so many of the emotions I feel..so many tonight, I just can't express it.... I enjoyed this. Kathleen (Kay) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a pretty thought sunshine silver very pretty, indeed! |
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