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daydreams... (senryu) |
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Jeffrey E. Osborne Member
since 2001-11-01
Posts 160out there 
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when the night is done yet always in my daydreams lovers you and I "people say I should learn some self-control, but I just want to exorcise my soul" |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
yup..I like this one too! LOL! Maybe my poetry reading eyes are a slave to anything that has to do with lovers and the night!  Nice one, Jeffey!  Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sounds more like night dreams....and I enjoyed! Thank you! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jeffrey, Enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Jeffrey, your beautiful heart shines with romance! (smiles) She will always love you, sweet friend, for your heart shines with eternal happiness! May love always shine in you and fill you with joy always! (sigh) I love it, sweet friend! (big huggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeffrey, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I love this Jeff! A few weeks ago I posted a daydream senryu! Daydreams are awesome because you can control them unlike regular night dreams!! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Day or night dreams this is sooooo romantic.   copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
(siiiighh) very nice very nice.. regardless of it's size.. the true beauty that lies in this work of yours can never be surpassed. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . this is well done. . . daydreams are when you know it's real. . . or, so they say. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I have daydreams just like this....Magnificent poem that speaks from the heart. I love it. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite! "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
enjoyed.. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Jeffrey, Sweet senryu Very much enjoyed Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is a very nice thought jeff.. nothin like daydreams..hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I like this. Very precise. Well done. |
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