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In The Season Would You Then Love?
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In The Season Would You Then Love? |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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polka dotted in gold and sent the miles to sit beneath your treee would you open me slowly savoring the pretty outside or would you rip apart the whisper of covering delving quick and deep for the gifts in waiting? If my thoughts and passions were cherries in chocolate how many boxes would have claim as yours? If I were pale divinity sprinkled with pecan surprises would you want to know the recipe that made me so rich or would you simply devour, with passion and at once the delicious dessert in your hands? Would you revel in the dark chocolate fudge of my eyes lovemade, not homemade but still perfect enough to send your lovebuds roaring? If I were the warm smell of baking pies how deeply would you inhale me imagining my flavor and how much of me, freshly baked, would you have before you were content? If I were eggnog, would you drink me plain or sprinkle me in love and cinnamon? If my one Christmas wish were you would you be surprised? Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I would be so pleasantly suprised, this is soooooooo romantic and beautiful! (sigh) I love dark chocolate and warm fudge and egg nog, with lots and lots of cinnamon on top! (smiles) Your heart is always so sweet in your lovely poems! (sigh) May he always love you and cherish the beauty of your heavenly words! You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Jennifer! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* oh my......two things...someone is going to really love this poem and I think it will be Passion's men.  and now I have a sugar craving.....I think I need some sweet milk chocolate. *giggling* this is a sensual delight no matter how you look at it. **hugs**Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . that's tough. . . a present that I want to savor, but yet want to have as much of as possible right away. . . hmmmmmmmmmmm. . .  perhaps a little of both, savoring and then getting as much as possible. . . great job. . .  ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
My stars, gentle one, there are too many choices, so I will just pick one..to continually have your gentle nature to always be in my mind...very gentle smile |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
!!! This is delicious.. I hope your love would savor ever bit of you and appreciate the gift he had been given. This is a wonderful poem.. and I really enjoyed reading it. I truely hope you love does too. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this...now I'm thinking of pecan pie...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
What man would not want to just devour each of the delicious treats? Could his patience allow him to savor each one slowly...Mannn.. Now I am hungry... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If I were me in a package with a red bow polka dotted in gold and sent the miles to sit beneath your treee would you open me slowly savoring the pretty outside or would you rip apart the whisper of covering delving quick and deep for the gifts in waiting? If my thoughts and passions were cherries in chocolate how many boxes would have claim as yours? If I were pale divinity sprinkled with pecan surprises would you want to know the recipe that made me so rich ======================================= Im smiling at clever clever you... love this poetic play on the season's essence. this is a creative twist Jenn very cool poem You really dont play fair...choco cherries..yowzers Its not like you to say sorry, |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is luscious, Jenn, really. Kathleen (Kay) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Delicious Jenn! Well done! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
This is quite the gift giving idea! But, would Santa be able to put the gift of a person under the tree? I like it. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
s - l - o - w - l - y always s - l - o - w - l - y to savor every minute of it. Such temptation! Nice work, Jenn. e |
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