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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Reveal By: Noah Eaton 6/20/01 Reveal your heart to me I will nurture it with my life May my words always warm your heart All my prayers are answered in your eyes Reveal your tears to me I will be there to hold you close While I will heal your pain and listen to your heart Fulfilling your joys through understanding your sorrows Reveal your words to me I will be there to answer your trill We’ll be together like Romeo and Juliet Writing our gest together under true loves will Reveal your body to me I will fondle you with loving comfort As you lie naked in my arms, I will touch your warm skin gently Feeling your heart beat, hearing you laugh and suspire I will reveal all my love for you Will you reveal all your love to me too? You are everything I want to see Let me reveal my love to you [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!Such a request......Looks like this is a night for passionate love poem. Very well done, Noah. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Boy! All the PiP men have become very passionate tonight! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
And its not even a full moon tonight! Wow!!!!!! what passion. Very well done, Noah. I hope she appreciates you.    copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
sweet noah..you look so young (!) to be such the romantic! you write as though you have once BEEN that romeo from long ago...  very much enjoyed... hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oh my love, you are wise beyond your years! I love it! *kisses* You are my romeo for sure RP [This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 12-08-2001).] |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
he he he.. shes a lucky girl, noah... a lucky girl.. :-) Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Yes...I believe an old soul of Romeo does live within you Noah. You outpour so easily. Something many men of many years are still unable to do. I applaud your art and your heart! Sincerely, Regina |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you are such a sweet romanticus.....lucky girl she is .....you are an awesome poet my dear friend. ((hugs)) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice romantic thoughts to warm up a cold Sunday. Thanks Noah. Sandra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - you write from your heart a writing that is most passionate, most lovely, and most wanting... I hope you find the one you are seeking... BC |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Noah This was absolutely stunning and there is no doubt that your words always warm my heart. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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