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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-12-07 12:55 PM

A Moment of Time

This moment is mine all mine.
So I will take this opportunity
to record a few thoughts for eternity.

I feel a woman's sexy body
within my lustful fingertips
and I admire every touch
I take in sinful succulence
and I desire her more and more
with every move I make
and I feel inspired to breathe
her in with every breath I take.

In time I realize she is the
only woman that I truly adore
so I offer her my heart for
these moments and for evermore.

Will she desire me enough
to consider to be mine
or will this become only a memory
we shared within a moment of time.

JamesLee
December07
2001

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 12-07-2001).]

Keith Morgan
Member

since 2001-10-29

Posts 114
Md

1 posted 2001-12-07 01:06 AM

You have expressed the sentiments of all those who have ever been in love. Nicely written, I look forward to more.!!!!!!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-12-07 11:26 AM

James, this is so soft... glides across my heart so gently

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-12-07 12:41 PM

*sigh* Oh James....You sure can write romance! Love this one, I do!
~Hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2001-12-07 01:16 PM

this flows with romance across the page James.
well written.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2001-12-07 02:09 PM

James,

Always treat her tenderly, with kindness and honesty. Then, yes, she will want you. VERY good write, by the way!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-12-07 02:57 PM

James I hope it goes on forever.
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2001-12-07 04:19 PM

(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet James, I too have these feelings always to the girl I love! (sigh) You always write passionate, sweet love so well, may this be a moment that will last eternally as she will always love you! (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

8 posted 2001-12-07 04:25 PM

*sigh* I love it when you write like this. Romance flows so beautifully from your pen. **hugs**

I hope there are countless moments filled with all the passion of your heart.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2002-01-08 11:14 PM

Thank you Keith, Sea, Nancy, Gentle Spirit, Auguste, Sandra, Noah and Startime for reading and responding...James

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