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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-12-06 06:32 PM






(For My Sweet Joanna...my sweet lady sparrow)

Tunnel Of Love
By: Noah Eaton
12/6/01

Gently I take your hand into our cozy canoe
Sailing off into a lovers dreams come true
Sitting back with you, paddling into a cupids heart
Waiting to come out the other end, true lovers wishing on the same star

Hearing the smooth jazz play, harps and violas and saxophones dancing
Softly I hold your hand, you feel the softness of my hand alone touching
Looking deep into my eyes, smiling to see them shine
Watching clouds float about with angels and cupids kissing in the sky

We see angels running through lilac fields, proposing to marry
Sweet young boys and girls holding hands under crabapple trees
Knights in shining armor holding their lady-loves close in felicity
Sweet lovers shadows kissing against the tropical sunset lovingly

Slowly we enter a starry room, glistening with comet tails
We watch as one lights silhouettes of lovers, glowing with happy fuchsia hail
We stare in each others eyes, tears reflecting the cupids bow
Falling in love with you, now knowing we're somewhere over the rainbow

Together we look at that star, knowing we've found each other in bliss
Sighing with happiness watching you cry, kissing your sweet lips
Our hearts melt together, as we sail to the Milky Way
Riding loves magic carpet ride upon a sparkling stream of stars, hearts melting gay

I hold you, you hold me, sailing out of the Tunnel Of Love
Kissing each other passionately like happy turtle doves
And I carry you in my arms, kissing you as I hold you for dear life
Knowing I am in heaven because I'll always have my sweet RosePetal
My love of my lifeā€¦


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-06-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-06 07:10 PM


this is tender, Noah.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
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2 posted 2001-12-06 08:10 PM


Aw Joanna is so lucky to have a guy with your heart Noah.  I think any girl would fall for you if they knew your true beauty inside.  One lucky woman for you and i think vise versa too.  Keep the love flowing!

    From your friend,
         Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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3 posted 2001-12-06 08:24 PM


Oh sweet Noah!  Another beautiful write for your beloved Joanna...*sigh*...bet that star was pink!
~hugs to you both, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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4 posted 2001-12-06 10:10 PM


oh honey you are sweeter than sugar! all I can say is WOW!! You leave me speechless
Keep the beautiful poems coming.

love,
your RosePetal

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5 posted 2001-12-06 10:25 PM


Enjoyed reading this Noah...James
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6 posted 2001-12-07 06:06 AM


Noah,you are so romantic You could melt anyones heart

Juanita

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7 posted 2001-12-07 07:51 AM


Noah, these are gettng more and more beautiful. Your love glows.
Sandra

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8 posted 2001-12-07 08:32 AM


Noah...the black *itch (my scoot) would cough a kick start if I wrote something like this..but it is mighty fine guy....young love that advertises the tenderness is muy bueno!!
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9 posted 2001-12-07 08:46 AM


Awww! This is so sweet Noah. Thank you for sharing this.
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