Open Poetry #17 |
Tunnel Of Love |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(For My Sweet Joanna...my sweet lady sparrow) Tunnel Of Love By: Noah Eaton 12/6/01 Gently I take your hand into our cozy canoe Sailing off into a lovers dreams come true Sitting back with you, paddling into a cupids heart Waiting to come out the other end, true lovers wishing on the same star Hearing the smooth jazz play, harps and violas and saxophones dancing Softly I hold your hand, you feel the softness of my hand alone touching Looking deep into my eyes, smiling to see them shine Watching clouds float about with angels and cupids kissing in the sky We see angels running through lilac fields, proposing to marry Sweet young boys and girls holding hands under crabapple trees Knights in shining armor holding their lady-loves close in felicity Sweet lovers shadows kissing against the tropical sunset lovingly Slowly we enter a starry room, glistening with comet tails We watch as one lights silhouettes of lovers, glowing with happy fuchsia hail We stare in each others eyes, tears reflecting the cupids bow Falling in love with you, now knowing we're somewhere over the rainbow Together we look at that star, knowing we've found each other in bliss Sighing with happiness watching you cry, kissing your sweet lips Our hearts melt together, as we sail to the Milky Way Riding loves magic carpet ride upon a sparkling stream of stars, hearts melting gay I hold you, you hold me, sailing out of the Tunnel Of Love Kissing each other passionately like happy turtle doves And I carry you in my arms, kissing you as I hold you for dear life Knowing I am in heaven because I'll always have my sweet RosePetal My love of my lifeā¦ [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-06-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is tender, Noah. Kathleen (Kay) |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Aw Joanna is so lucky to have a guy with your heart Noah. I think any girl would fall for you if they knew your true beauty inside. One lucky woman for you and i think vise versa too. Keep the love flowing! From your friend, Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh sweet Noah! Another beautiful write for your beloved Joanna...*sigh*...bet that star was pink! ~hugs to you both, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oh honey you are sweeter than sugar! all I can say is WOW!! You leave me speechless Keep the beautiful poems coming. love, your RosePetal |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this Noah...James |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Noah,you are so romantic You could melt anyones heart Juanita |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah, these are gettng more and more beautiful. Your love glows. Sandra |
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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
Noah...the black *itch (my scoot) would cough a kick start if I wrote something like this..but it is mighty fine guy....young love that advertises the tenderness is muy bueno!! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awww! This is so sweet Noah. Thank you for sharing this. |
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