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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-12-06 04:01 PM

In the Month of Remember

What does it hurt then,
Remembering ~

Seems quite innocent
If we chance upon
A moment

In the month of remember,
A dateless time,
With only a pen to guide us
Only a page to inspire

A moment
Unsurpassed as never before
Or will ever be
Again

So I ask you,
What if
We take a lifetime of
Remembers
Encapsulate them
Into this Moment

And make it

A

Life’s span…

Would you love with me there?

With thanks for the inspiration
to Janet Marie and Martie,
for a poem, and a comment….

sodpossom
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since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

1 posted 2001-12-06 04:05 PM

Very beautiful!!

Stevie

"In all things tried,you did the best you could do"

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-12-06 04:07 PM

A moment
Unsurpassed as never before
Or will ever be
Again
============================

I knew when I saw the title ...
I smiled as soon as it popped up...
a smile that grew larger with each lovley line......
my heart smiled when I read the small print
thank you K-Sun

Temptress

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since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-12-06 04:11 PM

This is beautiful!

Could we, as poets, officially name every month the month of remembering?

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2001-12-06 04:13 PM

Beautiful!!!!

Charisma

~*Theresia~*

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2001-12-06 04:49 PM

Absolutely Exquisite

Lyra

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

OWG
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 155
California

6 posted 2001-12-06 05:29 PM

this month especially...nice moves sunshine

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-12-06 05:37 PM

Karilea, this is a keeper!
Thank you so much...I needed this one today!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

8 posted 2001-12-06 05:39 PM

A man would be a fool not to spend his life there, wouldn't he? Very nicely penned, Karilea.

Balladeer

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9 posted 2001-12-06 05:57 PM

It never hurts traveling back to the land of remember....so many beautiful things are there...that's a place poets travel to very often..and the fortunate ones can bring those days to the present..you done good, Sunshine

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

10 posted 2001-12-06 06:08 PM

This is so pretty. The month of 'remember'-what a lovely thought.

Nan

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2001-12-06 06:13 PM

This one truly likes me

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

12 posted 2001-12-06 08:39 PM

I'm pulled in so many directions lately, I'm in definate need of a 'month of remember'
Do you have a spare kicking around to lend?

Joe Lamando
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since 2001-11-20

Posts 124
Massachusetts,USA

13 posted 2001-12-06 09:12 PM

A lovely poem,
And what a great idea!
Thanks,
Joe Lamando

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2001-12-06 10:15 PM

Enjoyed reading this..James

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

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On A Journey To The Unknown

15 posted 2001-12-07 08:33 AM

I lke this, Sunshine. Thank you for posting it.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

16 posted 2001-12-09 04:08 PM

Karilea...I have been having computer problems..thank you for making sure I didn't miss this wonderful poem. You are a special lady, poet friend. Hugs!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

17 posted 2001-12-09 04:34 PM

(smiles) May we all capture every one of our precious memories and weave them together like pearls on a necklace! (sigh) BRAVO!!! Your words always shine with sheer wisdom and love! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

18 posted 2001-12-09 05:25 PM

This is a real beauty Sunshine, sweet girl, I'm with you all the way

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just let me know. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

19 posted 2001-12-10 02:24 PM

always remember
a lifetime of love for us
encapsulated

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

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Ontario, Canada

20 posted 2001-12-10 02:30 PM

This is simply beautiful Karilea ... a delicate piece with a wonderful flow. Very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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