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A Sweet Surprise!!
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A Sweet Surprise!! |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Isn't this a great relief, Just to be in the belief... That an end is coming to our grief... For, I heard the news-in-brief... That they caught the sneaking thief... Enjoying his hot roast beef, With his pal, The Police Chief!!!! |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
What a cute surprise, I loved the way you rhymed this! I cant wait to see more from you! RP |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
 Thank you RosePetal...i am pleased that you liked it... luv & hugs, amigo |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
On the contrary, no..i will be stressed out wondering if the Police Chief is taking bribes.. delightful musing..gave me a chuckle.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amigo~ A cute little grin you've given me to wear this day~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Amigo, Cute, enjoyed the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Amigo, I love this, you have such clever ways of rhyming and expressing in your wonderful words, BRAVO!!! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet amigo, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
such a fun read |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well, I guess you wouldn't want a hungry Chief. But don't they get their meals free already, not to mention donuts? LOL, this was funny, thanks for the laugh. |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
faterider...then i would have to call this a shocking surprise, i guess...thanks for stopping by... marge...thank you...i feel happy that this gave you a little one, for all the  you bring to us...  seymour tabin...thank you my friend...glad you enjoyed.... noah....thank you for all the time you take to express your feelings...happy that you liked it... sea...thank you midnitesun...i think i got the news at dinner time...saving the donuts for the morning... ...thank you for your sweet wordsluv, amigo |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Cute! Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very Cute! |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
This made me chuckle. Cool. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hey amigo I thought this was great and left a big smile on my face. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Thank you dear ones...I'm glad you found it fun...sorry, I'm in a rush....I have to run... see you soon...  hugs, amigo |
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