Open Poetry #17 |
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A Sweet Surprise!! |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Isn't this a great relief, Just to be in the belief... That an end is coming to our grief... For, I heard the news-in-brief... That they caught the sneaking thief... Enjoying his hot roast beef, With his pal, The Police Chief!!!! |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
What a cute surprise, I loved the way you rhymed this! I cant wait to see more from you! RP |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
![]() ![]() luv & hugs, amigo |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
On the contrary, no..i will be stressed out wondering if the Police Chief is taking bribes.. delightful musing..gave me a chuckle.. ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amigo~ A cute little grin you've given me to wear this day~ ![]() *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Amigo, Cute, enjoyed the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Oh Amigo, I love this, you have such clever ways of rhyming and expressing in your wonderful words, BRAVO!!! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet amigo, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
such a fun read ![]() |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well, I guess you wouldn't want a hungry Chief. But don't they get their meals free already, not to mention donuts? LOL, this was funny, thanks for the laugh. |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
faterider...then i would have to call this a shocking surprise, i guess...thanks for stopping by... ![]() marge...thank you...i feel happy that this gave you a little one, for all the ![]() ![]() ![]() seymour tabin...thank you my friend...glad you enjoyed.... ![]() noah....thank you for all the time you take to express your feelings...happy that you liked it... ![]() sea...thank you ![]() midnitesun...i think i got the news at dinner time...saving the donuts for the morning... ![]() luv, amigo |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Cute! ![]() Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very Cute! |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
This made me chuckle. Cool. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hey amigo I thought this was great and left a big smile on my face. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Thank you dear ones...I'm glad you found it fun...sorry, I'm in a rush....I have to run... see you soon... ![]() hugs, amigo |
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